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doubleF says
Hi ! My assessments :P
  • Logo is outdated
  • Font for the headings in the slider is weird
  • Global aspect lacks of colors (too gray)
  • Need something to be unique ;)
Just my opinion, hope it will help you ;)
Regards,
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doubleF says
Hi guy ! Sorry, but the reviewer said the truth…You need to compare your item with the current library and inspire yourself. Because at this time your template needs lots of improvements. Some IMPORTANT and basic problems:
  • Global style looks outdated
  • Typography needs to be worked, change it ;)
  • Spacing needs to be worked too
  • Put yourself in the customer’s shoes and think ergonomics
Just my opinion, hope it will help you ;)
Regards,
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doubleF says

Looks good ! But be careful with the spacing ;)

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doubleF says

Hi !

I just include it in my next item :P Just perfect ! You need an extended licence (75$) :).

Cheers

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doubleF says

Cool ;) Hope you’ll be accepted !

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doubleF says

Hi omrfrk !

Without link, it’s a little bit hard ;)

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doubleF says

Hi Gioska ! Good job ! I like it :) The main issue is the readability of your text: http://d.pr/i/xXFM (same problem in the contact area). Tweets slider goes too fast :P
Just my opinion, hope it will help you ;)
Regards,

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doubleF says
Hi mojo ! Good job, very unique, I like it ;) But you need to improve the typography: change the font. Then I think you should change the construction of some pages:
  • Contact: The map is too small, it should be better with a big map in the background (like this: here)
  • Resume: main aspect seems unworked…
Finaly, small circles near the title pages shouldn’t be in white but colored (same colors as the titles).

Just my opinion, hope it will help you ;)
Regards,

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doubleF says
Hi Amjad360 ! The most important problem is the general style and the consistency
  • Lots of elements looks outdated-> typography, shadow, buttons, slider
  • Don’t mix your colors ;) 3 colors are enough ! You choose lot of colors that do not go together …
  • Be unique !
Just my opinion, hope it will help you ;)
Regards,
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doubleF says
I Nurtai ! Some advices:
  • Should change the white background ->old
  • Social icons links are dead :P
  • Slider is too basic
  • Spacing need improvements
  • widgets bottom and footer need improvements too -> outdated
  • “search” in the search form isn’t centered
Just my opinion, hope it help ;)

regards,

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