Ya some weird minor glitch. Hope they fix it soon.
glenngoh saidI don’t see tags on the screenshot that you posted. All I see is what’s included in the file.
Is this some kind of bug? The keywords are repeated. I notice it only happen to the recent accepted files.
Ya the keywords for the graphic files included is what I mean. There are like 2 of each keywords.
Maybe you can try replacing the house with a map pointer instead. Looks more sleek and up to date design in my opinion
The concept is interesting but the execution isn’t really that appealing.
Firstly, the line-height between the info is kinda inconsistent. I can see that you are trying to extend the line of the barcode as the underline of the text. However, it will be better if the line-height is consistent. On top of that, the endpoint of the line is also inconsistent as well. I will suggest fixing it to a standard endpoint.
Secondly, the blue in the word John don’t really blend with the general red color theme.
Thirdly, try to lessen the effect you play on the business card. I see you use outer glow for the scanline, gradient overlay and drop shadow for the text. Sometime less is more.
Lastly, probably you can reduce the opacity of the pattern in the background as it is kinda too distinctive. Keep it subtle.
Need a better font. Scriptina don’t work very well here. Probably you should stick to one font instead of two different fonts. I will suggest ballpark weiner. Probably you can also try to use a more vibrant colors. Colors that will stand out more. Just my 2c.
Congrats to the winners =)
My work was rejected quite few times when I started. Most of us here will go through that in the process. Learn from it and move on. Probably you can show us your rejected work so we can provide some feedback on it. Never give up.