It’s essentially a nice idea, but the execution lacks for me.
It’s extremely repetitive in its set-ups, the cuts to close-up etc. How about varying and building the idea a little? How about teasing the audience with the concept a little bit before you show it in all its glory? How about building on the parallax idea a bit?Also, the camera moves are some of the clunkiest I’ve seen. I’d sort that out first, before you resubmit.
Image looks pretty cool though but as tobi said better to post the preview link
Keep calm everythings will works fine it’s just a mind game maybe Do your best!
Hi and welcome to the Marketplaces. Although I have absolutely no idea about webdesign and coding, I wish you good luck on themeforest and give you one of the most essential tips:
Don’t be discouraged by rejections.
Especially on themeforest, rejections seem to be something every author has to suffer through before he can get his first item approved. So don’t be disappointed, listen to the advice of the reviewers and fellow authors, and you will get your work posted on the pageKind regards,
I’m a dog lover great thread for me pesonally to watch cool pets!