Congratulations buddy! You deserve it
Turn out 24 on september eleven hey collis how old are you
It’s essentially a nice idea, but the execution lacks for me.
It’s extremely repetitive in its set-ups, the cuts to close-up etc. How about varying and building the idea a little? How about teasing the audience with the concept a little bit before you show it in all its glory? How about building on the parallax idea a bit?Also, the camera moves are some of the clunkiest I’ve seen. I’d sort that out first, before you resubmit.
Image looks pretty cool though but as tobi said better to post the preview link