I think you have focused too much on css3 / jquery features, rather than looking at the style of the design and making it easy on the eye.
I just feel the design lacks flow, its quite random all over the place.
I hope you see this as constructive and not negative feedback Keep at it!
Its quite cool, very ‘Windows 8esque’.
Be interesting to see the coded outcome and what features will show when navigating through the site.
In terms on whether it will pass, who knows these days! However it is a fairly unique style for a WP theme. The only thing I feel you could improve would be how the content is displayed, especially on the ‘Project name’ and ‘Services  Page’
Good luck Denis!
Typography and navigation are letting this down for me pal.
As @PhantasiaAeterna mentioned, condensed font in cases can be poorly used, especially for general content areas.
Navigation doesn’t fit in at all well with the overall theme. Improve this as a priority.
Just create your own site and sale your themes there. Price them cheaper than here and you’ll be making more money and you will have creative freedom to do as you wish.
Easy enough to say that but marketing a brand new personal theme site isn’t the easiest thing!
OT: Keep it up mate, I think its a nice theme, clean, crisp and I like the colours.
No points giving up on this one, maybe go for one last push, change it about a bit, add something edgey and funky to it (easy me saying this but think something innovative and bash it out)
Good luck pal
You have some nice JS features on the template as a whole.
I think the design of the homepage could be improved, the typography looks a bit random to me. I’m not a fan of the ‘Specialising in’ icons, they seem out of place.
On the about us page the Copyright paragraph is overlapping the content for me in Chrome, same with the Contact page.
Also I see you are trying to incorporate different colours to represent each page, but this isn’t very clear from the navigation or the homepage. Might be worth having something in the navigation, maybe the links are the same colours of each page the colour represents.
Have you checked it validates also?
Possibly make the template logo link to the homepage.
Like the overall idea of it, a few improvements and I’m sure it you will see it in the marketplace soon
Hope this all helps, I’m by no means 100% experienced with themeforest but thought i’d throw in my 2 cents.
There are quite a few free commerce wordpress plugins on the wp site. Might be worth taking a look over there to see if any of the plugins fulfil what you are looking for.
I’m sure a lot of authors who have released commerce themes will be happy to assist in helping you transform the selected theme to work with the free plugin.
There’s a couple of nice templates in the retail section, take a look and see if you can find something
Also there is a lot of talented authors on here who may be able to assist you with something custom.
I haven’t submitted it yet, my developer is coding it as we speak.
Unfortunately my HTML /CSS skils are fairly limited, its a shame I would love to be able design and code but I don’t have the time to learn whilst in full time work.
I’m expecting my first template to be rejected, so will post up the results and to gain any feedback from members on here when it does (as you can see I’m a glass half full kind of guy haha)
I’m new here but I’m wondering if its because when designs are first put up, they appear top of the list as ‘Date’ is the default order on all designs.
So you have more chance in people seeing your design, therefore resulting in more purchases.
New on Themeforest forums, but not new to themeforest, although I’ve never really delved deep into what this community is all about.
I’ll be submitting a template soon, its pretty stacked with JS features and quite a nice design.
Any tips on what I need to keep my eye out for in terms of the review process?
Thanks, looking forward to getting to know the community and getting involved with the majority!
Robps. Currently at work so can’t create a avatar.. looking fairly newbie at the moment!
Sorry for double post but did not realise I had already posted 9 times!! Lol