Overall looks nice, but typography and choice of font should be rethink ed, also check the whitespace.
Hi, Need some help for my rejected theme, Your comments are much appreciated .
These are the reviewer comments
Unfortunately your submission Evolve – Responsive Multi-purpose Theme isn’t quite ready for ThemeForest. Here’s some feedback from our Review team on why it couldn’t be accepted.http://d.pr/i/nU6l http://d.pr/i/iobu
You have not included a text domain
Please make sure you’re not stripping out any native functionality like wpautop and wptexturize. http://d.pr/i/kls0
overall appearance is good, but I think, you must build a new header. Also increase the left and right padding. best of luck for your next submission.
Hi, You must upload your email newsletter to a live server, and paste the url on (“Demo URL : .....”). If you don’t have hosting, create screenshots, and upload it to themeforest. Hope this helps.