regarding the fact that before the updated front page, a featured item was exposed for four weeks ,your formula doesn’t sound bad-still five weeks of spotlight-better than before.So from me:
just clicked on this accidentally! amazing work !http://audiojungle.net/item/strength-honor/8873117
I think the instruments you used here don’t sound too natural,the samples are not so good in my opinion.The rythm is catchy -I would take down the reverb there ,the bassline is good,maybe it needs a little more power;
Now when the melody starts would be the problem-the electric piano sounds too dull,the bell like synth is too…synthetic and the sax is not so appealing.
I would change the instruments and insert maybe instead the electric piano-a real piano,real bells,and instead of the sax melody add some harmony with some strings or piano maybe.At the end the song gets confusing.
The idea is there but there is much work to make it happen.
Hope my opinion helps!
simple,clean and efficient! you’ve got this right
nice minimalistic track! i think could go very good on background for a tech-related video.
definetly for ads-family,social etc! nice track
I think you have a nice melodic line here and would sound better if you use real\natural instruments ;because the synths you used sound outdated.Insert natural drums also-it can become a nice corporate song.
A little method that works for me:watch a little good stand up comedy on the net(try Robin Williams’ stand ups)-it always makes me change my state of mind; Maybe the answer would be :if I can’t smile maybe someone else cold make me.After a good laugh,open a cold one,listen to music,and start making some music .