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198seven says

any preivous work? portfolio website?

Hello eric,
I am also looking for freelance projects, below are my portfolio links.

Portfolio showcase website links:

Behance
Graphic river
Personal website

Few Websites I’ve worked on:

Eatoye
Himarkbiogas
Bankdhofar

Best Amjad

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198seven says

Also try this one! 198seven

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I got really frustrated don’t know what do to please guide me.

There are still part of my original suggestions that havent been touched:

http://awesomescreenshot.com/05btck6d0 -Scott

Alright Scott now will do exact as you shown in the screenshot, want to ask you something

1) you don’t like the heading font “Naqsh premium complete website with lots of features. Our Services are all focused on a single outcome strong creative result with a business reality.” I am using Droid serif for headings and Droid sans for body as you told me in my very first post, and now you said you don’t like the font, i am stick with only two typefaces shall i add another typeface?

2) line-height issue on slider text, right now the line of the text is 18px can i make it more or less?

Thank you very much Scott you are awesome and very kind person:)

Droid Serif is a nice font, just doesnt look right here. Try a different font for headings and try Helvetica for body.

Less line-height

alright thankx scott

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198seven says


I got really frustrated don’t know what do to please guide me.

There are still part of my original suggestions that havent been touched:

http://awesomescreenshot.com/05btck6d0 -Scott

Alright Scott now will do exact as you shown in the screenshot, want to ask you something

1) you don’t like the heading font “Naqsh premium complete website with lots of features. Our Services are all focused on a single outcome strong creative result with a business reality.” I am using Droid serif for headings and Droid sans for body as you told me in my very first post, and now you said you don’t like the font, i am stick with only two typefaces shall i add another typeface?

2) line-height issue on slider text, right now the line of the text is 18px can i make it more or less?

Thank you very much Scott you are awesome and very kind person:)

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198seven says

I got really frustrated don’t know what do to please guide me.

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198seven says

Now they again rejected it, i did as scott and you people told me here you can see this New demo http://www.198seven.com/naqsh_premium_template/

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198seven says

I really do not like the contrast of your template – http://contrastrebellion.com/ check this link to get some idea.

Also, IMO your current design is too greyish

Good Luck :)

There are various template on TF with the greyish colors :)

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198seven says

I have a question: if those who ask for a feedback do not listen to those who give this feedback what is the sense to ask for the feedback?

Nothing has changed in your template, spacings, images (bad ones), line-height, colours, huge icons, small font size paragraphs, black borders, so on and so forth–all stayed as it had been before. You removed huge “View More”, that is correct, but all the rest?

Listen to people who give you advices (and by the way, as you see, they are not people who were born just yesterday and they understand in design not a little) and you have all chances to bring your template to much better look. Wish you that heartily.

Its easy to say “nothing has changed in your template” please see the demo’s below

Old demo http://www.198seven.com/naqsh-premium-website-demo/

New demo http://www.198seven.com/naqsh_premium_template/

and compression both of them.

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198seven says

I can see that you did work on it and maybe it even got better since thread one, but I am not sure if the improvements are enough to justify continuing to work on that.

Your typography is still bad, especially the hierarchy. Also, the contrast is not doing it. The spacing between text and other elements is really bad. Also, the images are not appealing, the colors are pale (therefor contrast) and there is no real frame that keeps all the elements together (therefor whitespace).

I think this is about your fourth or fifth thread about your theme, and you seem to continue getting the same feedback which does not seem to help you. Your theme is not close to getting accepted as the reviewer is not ready to give you specific feedback yet. Did you try opening a ticket to see if the reviewers may help you more detailed?

In general I always say don’t lose hope and continue working, but the changes you are making are not significant. It seems you want to stick to your theme as it is, but you will need massive changes in order to get it accepted. I seriously think you might run into chances to get into trouble for keeping uploading the theme without significant changes.

I’m sorry mate, we have all been there, but now it’s time to move faster than you have until now.

All the best

Edit: You might as well disregard my whole message and just look at Scott’s screenshot. He sums up what I want to tell you pretty much.

I really appreciated your comment, i get frustrated when i heard this “changes you are making are not significant” please see this old version of my rejected theme

Old demo http://www.198seven.com/naqsh-premium-website-demo/

New demo http://www.198seven.com/naqsh_premium_template/

and compression both of them.

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198seven says

http://awesomescreenshot.com/096t2flc0

Thanks for your time scott .. you are really helpful for me

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