PS: Don’t hit/kick/punch/bite me if I’d rejected your file before
I think now home page is much much better, still I think shadows under 3 teaser box images must be lighter and footer is not yet perfect. Something disturbs me with red colour links, maybe try to change and see how it might look with other colour? Grey? On Service page typography is not yet ultra-great, all the rest is good to my eye, topic of uniqueness I do not touch, it is subjective, I would say it is not unique enough, but me is me, Envato reviewers will judge. Wish you good luck! P.S. How easy to see somebody’s faults and not notice our own ones… I wish it could be vice versa…
- Thank you very much,virtuti. I will fix it,the font on some area need to fix because it different to the rest (will fix it).
+ topic of uniqueness I do not touch, it is subjective, I would say it is not unique enough
- you’ve mean the header title of the page right? ex : Portfolio 1 column :,Element :,Full page : etc
or the topic of the portfolio and post ?
Thank you, Decneo
bobural saidIt’s br tag
... I am not touching the design…but the code. If you check http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http://www.multipixels.net/wordpress/omnim/ you will see that it has some errors there… Try fix that and pass the standards. The design could not be the only reason of your rejection. And remember… don’t take it personal! Adapt, improve and innovate. Just my 2 cents…
Decneo saidNot thank at all. I mean that way of thinking in design should be very fresh and contemporary to be accepted here, because this is what ThemeForest is looking for. Things that were nice and fresh 2-3 years ago are not interesting anymore. TF is looking for something that can be a good contribution to design art of today, not of yesterday. Novel thought, idea, concept–anything that can amaze and admire “spoilt” populus. I mean of course usable and pragmatic design, not a set of just hot entertaining effects and loud graphics. And this is what your template currently is lacking–original idea, state-of-the-art concept. Yes, I understand, it is just a template, it is not a piece of art and still… just a template can be a piece of art too.
Thank you very much virtuti,I like your reviewed that’s mean I have a lot of things to improve but I don’t understand some of you said : - Uber-modern ? what’s type of it,sorry I did’t get it. - choice of typefaces could be better ? which font I have to use it.
I have to change my twitter base,right?
for your question :
+ why App store icon means Graphic Design in your template? I thought I just use for example, is it wrong to use wrong icon?
+ if a big image is of the same size as a thumbnail–then what is sense in the enlarge option? this one is also I just use the same image for demo view ,it should larger for preview?
Thank you again I will improve it as your advise.Best regards, Decneo
About typefaces–absolutely tricky thing. To find a perfect set of typefaces is not that easy as it seems at a first glance. It can be a matter of hours of monotonous job–find, try, delete, find, try, delete. And every time it is individual choice for individual project. Fonts bring mood, each template has its own mood and same set of fonts correctly chosen for one template may occur to be totally wrong for another one. Try this: http://designshack.net/articles/typography/10-more-great-google-font-combinations-you-can-copy/ Some good combinations are there.
Nothing wrong is with a wrong icon, simply it looks wrong:))) I think that even in case of template (which will be edited, changed, adjusted and razed to the ground by a customer) it is correct to be as real as possible. I mean if a heading says about telephone there should be a telephone icon nearby, even if a customer will change the heading and icon to something different, so what?... our task is to show all live and real, as if template is not a template but a real website. Same about photos, it is simply wrong from the point of view of logics–if there is an option to enlarge the image, small image and large image cannot be of the same size, otherwise it is illogical and odd…What an opus I wrote…:)))
Nice explain I thought I got what you’ve mean now, and I’m refreshing my idea now. I will improve it and will let you know.
virtuti , Could I get your E-mail?
Get some help from Color pallet , available online.
Work On Some Typography,as Virtuti Said.
Improve Design ,take some inspiration from online showcases as available at smashing-magazine, noupe, etc, sites or blogs.
Hope it may HelpHappy Designing Stay Fit
Thank you williamhenrygates for your comment it helps me.thank you.