for my opinion : you need to improve white space, both macro and micro.color on the overall too etc.
on the quote its need more white space ,CONTACT INFORMATION : in my opinion no need line separator.etc
I got rejected again.
Please Author that have this experience rejected please explain about this issue please.
here is from reviewer :
- There are a few inconsistent spacing/padding as well as alignment issues throughout the design. I’d like you to go over it with a fine toothed comb and weed out these basic design issues.
- Please look into how you’re using white space—both micro and macro. It needs to be intuitive, consistent and frame the content correctly in the manner you seek.
- Overall typography and visual + typographic hierarchy needs additional refinements and improvements before it will be ready for Theme Forest.
I’ve updated everything now and also add video widget to the sidebar.
what’s looking now?
PS: Don’t hit/kick/punch/bite me if I’d rejected your file before
I think now home page is much much better, still I think shadows under 3 teaser box images must be lighter and footer is not yet perfect. Something disturbs me with red colour links, maybe try to change and see how it might look with other colour? Grey? On Service page typography is not yet ultra-great, all the rest is good to my eye, topic of uniqueness I do not touch, it is subjective, I would say it is not unique enough, but me is me, Envato reviewers will judge. Wish you good luck! P.S. How easy to see somebody’s faults and not notice our own ones… I wish it could be vice versa…
- Thank you very much,virtuti. I will fix it,the font on some area need to fix because it different to the rest (will fix it).
+ topic of uniqueness I do not touch, it is subjective, I would say it is not unique enough
- you’ve mean the header title of the page right? ex : Portfolio 1 column :,Element :,Full page : etc
or the topic of the portfolio and post ?
Thank you, Decneo