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Foos says

Try to make your theme’s design more unique. There are plenty of templates here with the same general design and features and this fails to stand out. Adding features, options and styles will help increase your template’s value and increase its ability to be approved. ;)

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Foos says

Thanks so much for your detailed help iKreativ.

I fixed all these problems I think http://domdesignonline.de/gr/sky/index.html

Good enough now?!

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Foos says

I agree, there are a lot of spacing issues and I also think the typography needs work.

I also don’t think the “sky” header fits in with the grey background.

Scott.

Thanks for your help!

What did you mean exactyl with “spacing issues” :) ?

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Foos says

Rejected!!! :(

I´m so dissapointed. The item was rejected.

I received this standard answer:

”=== Why We’ve Declined Your Submission ===

1.Your template has a good start but, as we have high standards, you will need to make some additional improvements in overall aesthetics and aspects such as typography, graphics, and spacing.

2. There are a few inconsistent spacing/padding issues throughout the template. I’d like you to go over the design with a fine toothed comb and weed out these basic design issues.

3. Overall template typography needs additional refinements and improvements before it will be ready for Theme Forest. The template needs improvements in visual hierarchy primarily using typographic elements such as headings.

4. Try to make your theme’s design more unique. Adding features, options and styles will help increase your template’s value and increase its ability to be approved. However, a unique design will be a key factor for approval.

5. Even with the current design, a significant increase in the polish of the various aspects of the theme may just swing the decision in your favor. Right now, it doesn’t feel like a premium theme. “

Now, I don´t know what I have to change specific on my theme.

Some officials are here or any other user, who can help me?!

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Foos says

Hey guys,

what do you think about my new template:

http://domdesignonline.de/gr/sky/index.html

Thanks for your opinion!

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Foos says

Try a few more colors and try to get a glow-effect on it, for example :)

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Foos says

Hey Burzoman,

in my opionion the cards are very boring. ;) There is no contrast and the colors are very pale, I think.

You should try another font. For example use a transparent object, which includes your new typo?!

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Foos says

There is still no navigation. The sky is covered by the shadow and looks bad.

I think you can move the sky above the slider, just give it a try.

Regards, Danny

Of course, there is a navi. And no shadow anywhere :) I think you have to delete your cookies :)

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Foos says

Now I have solved some space problems, made a second version and added a menu. What happened? Nothing :) My reviewer wrote, that now it isnt a landing page?!? Hää?

Please help me: Why it isnt a landing page now?\\

http://www.domdesignonline.de/gr/html/lander/

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Foos says

Thank you! Will check these notes and improve my template.

Some more ideas?

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