@i11ume on the up side, atleast you’ve started, that means your goals of being a better designer are closer than they were yesterday
Work on your typography and for the sake of design, remove those backgrounds. Ghost was meant to be simple, you’ve successfully made it seem otherwise.
@ikreative is harsh but honest,You have the right idea with the parallax and effects, but your design is absolutely awful. Read some blogs about typography, practice your design skills, practice! practice! practice! then when you think you are good..Practice is even more.
Typography and spacing, play around with different fonts maybe as Dominic suggested
Thanks Dominic, I’ll try and make these changes