The lows are too dominant, which I think is contributing to the interference. Many of the guitar notes (especially melody) seem to stop abruptly and have strange patterns. It is a little too abstract perhaps. Good concept, just not fully realized. May need to add some more chordal structure to make it less abstract. I disagree on the reverb. I don’t believe there is too much.
thank you for your feedback Hopefully my next one will get approved
Maybe you should only use the shutters as a transition for the preview, as you used other transitions to explain your item.
https://soundcloud.com/reptilefx/desert-guitar-preview/s-udSXn Feedback is highly appreciated. thank you