You’re nowhere near ready to be submitting themes, you need to concentrate on learning basic design principals before trying again.
Nowhere near good enough, it won’t be accepted in any category let alone the .PSD category, which is the hardest to be approved in.
Typography and spacing need serious work.
It’s nowhere near the required standard, looks like an initial mock.
I think you need to spend more time learning basic design principals before submitting again.
Contact the theme author.
Design feels dated, looks unfinished and the typography and spacing are terrible.
Checkout Dribbble & Awwwards for current trends.
Read tutsplus and smashingmagazine.
Don’t give up.
Checkout Dribbble & Awwwards for inspiration, and then take some of that inspiration and inject it into your current design.
Study other peoples UI / UX, see how they get it to flow, improve the typography by playing with typeface / size / color / line-height.
Play with the spacing, give each element more breathing room.
Play with the colors and contrast to increase readability.
To summarize in all, this theme isn’t ready for themeforest imho. It is poorly designed. Accept it. Work on it.Take the advices from LoveThemes instead of arguing. You are lucky he replied your thread and gave some useful suggestions from his busy schedule.
Yes, I’m just honored personally I don’t like his work, he make one/two very simple design and put 10 variation of it.Yes, I will make some new template. Learnig, learning, learning…
The same old story.
People ask for critique, but don’t like what they are told so get all defensive and don’t listen to advice.
Enjoy being rejected.
Thank you for the support.
I will work on the design today.
Please let me know what part of the design do you think needs changing? eg: the water waves, island, clouds, ship etc.for internet explorer smaller than ie9 i will use page redirection telling them to upgrade their browser.
All of it needs work, the graphics are very poor.