Well, you did some minor changes but this design needs some MAJOR improvements. It is still more or less the same as before. I would say that better start from scratch. You are still far from ThemeForest standards so you need to practice much more.
Ok, I will start from scratch. But can you please tell me what I’m doing wrong ? I really can’t see.
Thank you for taking time to responde.
It is not horrible, but your biggest issue is that you are missing the attention to details. For example this “Order now the product” button, grammar aside, you don’t see anything wrong with it? Like different left and right paddings? And your design is full of such small issues. Handling of small details like these is what makes difference between good and bad designer.
But let’s give you another few tips to get you started:
- Logo looks very amateurish
- Those bead photos under New Items looks cheap
- Logos in left part of the footer are too big, especially PayPal
- People under your testimonial section don’t look like they would be interested in beads
Again, those are just few points, but your design is not up to TF standards as a whole, so my advice will be to start from scratch, spend some time examining good designs, try to learn from your mistakes and do it better. It is only the matter od dedication and practice.
I also added:
Little spacing(padding) issues around the title.
KEEP IN TOUCH section look like a footer, also not the place there. Focus necessary part at first.
footer with client icon need to improve.
I’m recreating the logo I will move the Keep in touch section under testimonials Thank you
Thank you for feedback.
I have a friend that is selling this type of beads, so the cheap photos I made, because I was planing to give him a version.
Those are the types of beads that is selling, but here is what I’m planing to do further:
1. Spaces ( included microspaces ) reviewed
2. Change the cheap photos
3. Logo from the footer smaller
4. Change people from testimonials.
5 Checkout again the new trend from psd part
wow, 4 days and no sales yet ? What is happening with May ?
I just wanted to say THANK YOU!
Thank you for all of those who take the time to rate my item(and those who vote in general) and of course for those who are buying my items!