Your changes aren’t significant enough, especially as this style has been done to death. I’d move away from this style and come up with something more unique.
Thanks but I want now my changes in typography was correct in your mind, I try to fix line height, weight, color,.... to create better consistancy and remove Icons and line from headings
It’s just not good enough. This style has been done a LOT lately and done much better than yours, it’s that simple.
Hi, thanks but I try to improve my theme by your previous suggestion for my theme herehttp://themeforest.net/forums/thread/hard-work-without-any-result-/123283?page=1
means you say, I do not continue this design?
It looks rather outdated
I’ll try and give you as much advice as possible – I’m currently going through a soft rejection spree and it’s killing me!
thank you, I will consider them on the next improvement.
I try more times to improve this design (it is psd for I want be sure to approved before convert to wordpress version) but the reviewer rejected it again without any detailed reason.
The message is like as always: The overall quality of your submission does not meet our aesthetic and technical requirements and will need to be improved before being resubmitted. Unfortunately we’re not able to provide more specific feedback for your submission at this time.https://redpen.io/fpw8q1
I try to improve this based on some feedback from forum but it is rejected again, If you have any Idea or suggestion please give me another feedback.
All of it, read the notes on the design.
Very thanks for comeback to replying my comments and for your time.
But I have confuse about space issue in my design yet. it was very helpful if you can mentioned at least 1 place and how can I learn more about it. thanks again.
While at a first quick look it might appear that this design doesn’t have such big issues, if you look at closely while you scroll something is pretty obvious.
The design kind of lacks unity in style. It is not consistent. The only thing really tying this together is the consistent section headline design. Other than that, while sections might be nicely designed/creative, they look like random pieces of different designs glued together. Here’s why, in my opinion:
- Typography – You use way too many fonts, font sizes, font styles and font colors. There’s no unity or a regular flow of headlines and body copy.
- Stylistic choices – You keep alternating between thin lines and wider lines without giving them a general meaning, why you use one in a place and why the other in another place. You alternate a lot between rounded corners and sharp corners on buttons, on boxes etc. This is not a good UI practice.
- Icons – I’m counting at least three different icon sets and even more icon areas designs in your layout. Again, lack of consistency.
Bottom line is that when you’re going for a one page design/html/theme, due to the fact that everything gets seen at almost the same time, every discrepancy in your design will be easily noticeable and I am fairly sure that’s why the reviewer keep rejecting it. I do believe you are on the right track, but what this design really needs is patience and a looot of fine tuning.
Chin up mate, I’m sure you’ll get it up for sale!Alex
Thank you so much for your time and your suggestion, I will consider these reasons on the next improve