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Pickoora says

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It was rejected so I might continue working on it. Otherwise I might give up :P

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Pickoora says

Thanks :) Good luck:)

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Pickoora says

The same problem was occuring for me and I switched browser from Firefox to chrome and It worked like a charm :)

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Pickoora says

I was so happy when I saw my first file accepted. Over the moon. :)

And It came with a surprise of 3 sales, when I first discovered it.

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Pickoora says

They Look very original and I am sure they would be useful to some :) Including me :)

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Pickoora says

Looking good so far. I like the style of text “Awesome night out”

I think you should work on the text at the bottom- it doenst fit in really, just looks like you got Myriad Pro and stuck it there. Maybe add some sort of graphic element at the bottom

Apart from that, keep on working on it :)

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Pickoora says

I dont think so. It is a bit too simple and there are different fonts all over the place(try to stick to one or two). I don’t think the design is great—Everything looks a bit out of place. Entrance is spelt wrong aswell

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Pickoora says

In the first product:

1. I think the items are a bit too varied. You have used three different fonts in the product For you,search and ok . Try to make the product have the same feel.

2. The border around the YOU search bar is a bit wonky and the top line is heavier than the bottom

3. In the OK search bars, on the left it is a bit wonky and the radius drops down a few pixels

In the second product:

1. I feel some of the icon/badge items at the bottom look out of place. It seems as if you have just put them they’re for the sake of it. The look a bit too different from the total design

Hope this advice was helpful

Pickoora

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Pickoora says

Also, Just thought I’d tell you that inspiration is spelled wrong

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Pickoora says

Thanks for the reply

and other advice/ more detailed constructive criticism anyone?

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