Too many text in small space. I think you should make text larger also give more contrast.
To be quite brutally honest, It looks like a free theme, and not a massively good one at that! It is far from Premium in it’s visuals. I’m not wanting to be an a**hole, but you need it telling straight, that’s the only way you will learn, and improve!
Take a look at some of the popular themes here on TF, and get some ideas from those guys.Good luck, and keep at it!!
Thanks for your reply.
Could you please let me know which places’ visuals should be improved?I am 15 so please give me more detailed information so that can help me improve it.
You are 15 ages?
I dont know but when I click on the URL then I get blank page (from Viet Nam)
Hey Chinese man, the demo don’t work.
Sorry dude, but there are far better(looking) free themes.
The way the review process works is kinda like this:Technically advanced with sub par visuals = Approved Technically basic with outstanding visuals = Approved Technically basic with sub par visuals – Rejected
I saw some themes of you on “that martkeplace”, why don’t you submit to TF? or they got rejections?
Have you read theme document?
Your theme got soft reject?
Several months ago I submitted this theme http://demo.lizatom.com/breeze/ Of course it got rejected (once or two more times then). I just got universal blabla reply that didn’t help me even a bit to improve the theme itself.
Today I stumbled across this theme [link removed]
I see someone just registers and his first (hardly premium) theme is automatically approved.Can someone tell me what magic is behind it? Obviously not perfect design or ass kicking effects…
The reviewer tell me: “focus to layout” and I think we should forgot 960 grids from today