Looks Pretty to Me! But What I felt like is you should Play more with Colours and Elements! and Yes Typography is what you need to work on! hope this Helps
Then you can get better results if you learn more about how to create materials, light set ups and or hrdi settings. By now those balls are/look quite flat renders. Try also ZBrush to make those balls have more volume. You should look for normal maps on low poli meshes. I normally use ZBrush-Maya, Mental Ray and/or in combination with Maxwell and Bunkspeed.
Heyy! I won’t say much about your flyer but What I feel is like it’s quite not ready for Marketplace. You need to work on Everything like Typography and Placing of Elements! Right now it’s look quite basic! I’ll suggest you to research on Marketplace! Hope this Helps!
Typography!! All you need to work on! Overall looks Good!
That’s nice, Renny.. but maybe it will be nicer if:
- Maybe add an image / icon with very soft overlay on background.. Something that symbolizes fun racing / speed. Visually, the challenge is to quickly make people aware (at least have a feeling) about your stepdads’ business category before they read the text.
- Maybe give the footer content a little more space. I believe design element is like human, they need room to ‘breath’.
Just some maybes from me.. just a thought.. apologize if I’m wrong.
+1 Well Said!
Lovely Work Mate. Looks Beautiful But As Far As I feel is like you should Play more with Objects Right now it look quite simple. Try adding More elements and Secondly Typography, Need to work with Typography! Overall Look’s Perfect. Cheers!