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Zanzad says



I’ve seen this design 1,000,002 times as of now. Thanks for this!!
I am seeking critique to improve it. Thanks anyway…

Honestly, with no disrespect towards you in any way, create something new. I can pull up over 200 themes that look exactly like yours on the TF marketplace. Most of which have authors that are “one and done” in the approval process.

The way I look at it is, if it takes you one day to imagine a concept, then put it to paper with perfect typography and color combinations, then you need to work for Google.

My design is dinamycally layout. Its mean, user can make layout as they want. This capture only one from unlimited layout possibility. Reviewer like that concept as the unique point.

The problem is about white space. Not the layout or design (user can make their own layout.)

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Zanzad says

I’ve seen this design 1,000,002 times as of now. Thanks for this!!

I am seeking critique to improve it. Thanks anyway…

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Zanzad says

nice one..

Thanks. unfortunately need polisher. Critique, please…

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Zanzad says

Hi, There,

I need feedback for my rejected Wordpress theme. Here the message from the reviewer:

“The issue here isn’t with the features of the template—the issue is with the design of the template itself. Right now, I’m sorry to saw the design isn’t upto the quality we’re looking for.

While I like the general concept and direction this theme has taken, the template’s design will need to be polished up significantly to be considered for approval.

Right now, your use of white space, the layout of elements and general styling will need significant improvements…..”

I am seeking constructive critique to improve it. Here my theme’s capture:

Link to the big image: http://oi43.tinypic.com/10h3yhd.jpg

Thanks in advance!

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Zanzad says
You misspelled Business at the top of the page

I’m working on it. Thanks.

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Zanzad says

Hello Zanzad, to my eye it has potential but requires yet a lot of work.

A couple of advices: since your theme has lot of content, try to reduce graphics and to unify what you will keep. Unify also arrows, read more buttons and other elements.

Second advice–much more accuracy. Currently, inaccuracy hurts the eye. Several examples: Home page black part–Business Activity photos have unequal right and bottom margins (gap between two rows of photos is bigger). Whole block of 6 photos is not aligned in its height with the slider height. Icons in circles–they sit inaccurately inside the circles (some icons touch the very upper edge of the circle (microphone for example), sometimes they sit exactly in the middle of the circle. Dropcaps are calculated incorrectly, recalculate them. Pricing tables, text box–right margin is narrower that the left one, text itself has no right padding at all.

And so on and so forth. Simply go through all your pages, block by block and correct all mistakes, wish you good luck!

Hello, Virtuti, Thanks for your detail feedback. I noted and checked all the elements, and I agree about the graphics. My theme look like too “graphical” while most of theme in TF not use tto much graphics.

Thanks, Virtuti.

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Zanzad says

http://awesomescreenshot.com/0cdtdz1b8 -Scott

Thanks, Scott. I saved and noted what you suggested. I’ll start to reconstruct from there. Basically, my theme provide 4 slider and the element can show and hide from option panel.

Here the full module’s link (with the other slider.)

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Zanzad says

Dear all,

I’ve submitted my first Wordpress theme but just rejected. I dont know where to start to improve my theme.

Here the link.

Please give me advise and feedback to reconstruct my theme.

Regard,

Zanzad

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Zanzad says

As a designer or writer, this often happens to me. Browsing, read and see could be a solution.

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Zanzad says

As I posted in your “duplicate” post:

Basically it just needs to be fresh, well put together and finished.

As it stands yours needs a ton of work. Here’s a little help: http://awesomescreenshot.com/076smftd4

-Scott

We are happy to have you here, Scott.

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