beetlesales saidI am seeking critique to improve it. Thanks anyway…
I’ve seen this design 1,000,002 times as of now. Thanks for this!!
Honestly, with no disrespect towards you in any way, create something new. I can pull up over 200 themes that look exactly like yours on the TF marketplace. Most of which have authors that are “one and done” in the approval process.The way I look at it is, if it takes you one day to imagine a concept, then put it to paper with perfect typography and color combinations, then you need to work for Google.
My design is dinamycally layout. Its mean, user can make layout as they want. This capture only one from unlimited layout possibility. Reviewer like that concept as the unique point.
The problem is about white space. Not the layout or design (user can make their own layout.)
I need feedback for my rejected Wordpress theme. Here the message from the reviewer:
“The issue here isn’t with the features of the template—the issue is with the design of the template itself. Right now, I’m sorry to saw the design isn’t upto the quality we’re looking for.
While I like the general concept and direction this theme has taken, the template’s design will need to be polished up significantly to be considered for approval.
Right now, your use of white space, the layout of elements and general styling will need significant improvements…..”
I am seeking constructive critique to improve it. Here my theme’s capture:
Link to the big image: http://oi43.tinypic.com/10h3yhd.jpg
Thanks in advance!
You misspelled Business at the top of the page
I’m working on it. Thanks.
Hello Zanzad, to my eye it has potential but requires yet a lot of work.
A couple of advices: since your theme has lot of content, try to reduce graphics and to unify what you will keep. Unify also arrows, read more buttons and other elements.
Second advice–much more accuracy. Currently, inaccuracy hurts the eye. Several examples: Home page black part–Business Activity photos have unequal right and bottom margins (gap between two rows of photos is bigger). Whole block of 6 photos is not aligned in its height with the slider height. Icons in circles–they sit inaccurately inside the circles (some icons touch the very upper edge of the circle (microphone for example), sometimes they sit exactly in the middle of the circle. Dropcaps are calculated incorrectly, recalculate them. Pricing tables, text box–right margin is narrower that the left one, text itself has no right padding at all.And so on and so forth. Simply go through all your pages, block by block and correct all mistakes, wish you good luck!
Hello, Virtuti, Thanks for your detail feedback. I noted and checked all the elements, and I agree about the graphics. My theme look like too “graphical” while most of theme in TF not use tto much graphics.
As a designer or writer, this often happens to me. Browsing, read and see could be a solution.