The design is good but it lacks uniqueness. Also add more features like different sliders, video etc.
The reviewer already said all the necessary things that needs to be changed. My advice is to take a look on how approved themes and templates (preferably popular items) look like and what makes them good. Then start working on yours. Goodluck. I’m sure you can do it!
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