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aliput says

Hi mojo1986,

Love the idea you’ve created with your theme. I have to agree with those that have mentioned your typography. There are a number of things I would personally do: 1. The type is to big. It looks a little clumsy. I would reduce all the text in size by at least 4 – 6 pixels including your button text. 2. Don’t use justified text. It puts unsightly gaps in-between the words and sometimes in-between the letters in some words. Make all your text range-left. 3. Just a few small personal points: - The section where you have ‘GENERAL DESIGN SKILLS’ can you line the % circles up with the left-hand edge of the headline. Or, alternatively see what it looks like if you centre everything within the two columns – so example: column 1 Eduction centred, then 1999 – 2006 centred, UNI … centred and so on. and the same in column 2. This way you can centre ‘GENERAL DESIGN SKILLS’ above the circles and so on…

Hope this helps. Aliput

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