It is too dull. Boring and so many repetition. seems like it’s just a lot of copy and paste of a few small pieces than a big creation. They can be used for some games, but still lacks something. ‘Seems’ like it’s been made in a rush. I suggest you to do some modifications before you re-submit it, but well, they’re just ‘suggestions’.
• First the tree. The leaves look like 4 repetition of one shape, scaled down. I suggest you to modify them a bit, so the leave benches don’t look just the very same. also try to add some shades in the foreground tree, it’s way too big to be simply flat. Not only these, I also suggest you to add 3-4 more tree variations so even if made into a game, the background wouldn’t look bored and repeated. seamless stuff have more fans. Also with a few minutes extra time, you can add 4-5 color variations for each tree. The more options there is, the better.
• Sky. easily add many variations to it. It’s pretty easy for you. Add morning blue, Noon blue, before sunset sky, sunset, dusk, dark night and dawn.
• The bright green land behind the foreground regardless it’s color and saturation, is JUST the copy of the foreground. It’s like you didn’t put any effort on it. Try to design a whole new layer, different than the foreground land. If made into a game, it’s gonna be parallaxed, so have that in mind to create a more farther land, less heights and smaller details.
• The grey ish blue background shade, It’s nice, but also add some more different trees to it, + create 2 additional layers for more parallax variation/options. No need to say adding some more variation of clouds would be appreciated. (also if you add some more stuff like some random bushes, crates, broken wooden wheel (use imagination) would help it be more appealing.)
Good luck with it.
My first Item got accepted on the first try and sold fine. as I put a huge amount of time, effort and focus on it. Later on, I had many rejections as I thought they were quite good. Kinda disappointing, but believe me, sometimes the reviewers have a real good reason to reject them. as for business cards, Here’s some tips: • Never use any fonts under 7pt for the front side. • Always Use CMYK • pay attention to the dimensions, blades and margins.
Congrats mate. Good luck with sales.
One secret tip about Graphic river: Never give up on reviewers
congrats mate. My first approved Item also was a mock up.
Congrats pal. Looking forward for much more higher round sales. Next milestone is 11111.
Congrats mate. Wish you much more sales.
hi. I know there is no reviewer here. but you should know the reason of rejection. I’m sure that the reviewer accepts or rejects each item within a second and without posting the specific reason. all I think the reviewer thought so “well I didnt like than reject.”
OK you graphic experts (no reviewer please) I read all referral links about the quality etc.and etc. but I believe everything is ok with my item.what should be the reason the rejection of this file? any clue ? thanks https://www.dropbox.com/s/utk0nidjvzjvgxi/preview-onboard.png
If you want an honest, it looks like a very simple drawing. the shoulders are like they’ve been drawn in a matter of seconds (It may have taken minutes or hours to be done, but that’s how it looks) Your lines are consistent on line depth. Try give it some Pressure simulation. Shadows, totally not OK.
Other than these, I also suggest you to add more shadow and highlight layers on the character and give it some depth and some more details. It’s Way too flat and way too simple.
Demorfoza said most of it.
I suggest you to use designs that interact with your typography elements to make their presence not only aesthetic but also essential to the card,
I also suggest you to move all the contact info to the back face of the card alongside with the website address. and on the front face do not use fonts under 7pt.
You know now I’ve actually started the design it’s actually quite a lot different so I think it will have to be a new item. Otherwise it might loose sales if the public don’t like it as much. Plus I wonder if the reviewers would allow such a big design change.
I would suggest an update, but since the changes are significant that makes it a new Item, well, a new submission is certainly the best option. Laters on, you can give out a package containing the new and the old template if you feel the sales are dropping.
I uploaded this and other flyer’s see examples:http://cdn-files.creafx-static.com/files/12562.jpg http://cdn-files.creafx-static.com/files/12599.jpg http://cdn-files.creafx-static.com/files/12556.jpg
Got this feedback: Unfortunately your submission Futuristic Party Flyer GraphicRiver Is not ready for and can not be resubmitted as it did not meet our minimum requirements for quality and / or marketplace policies. In order for submissions to be Considered for sale they must be of high aesthetic and technical quality, unique to our library and can not be in violation of Envato’s policies. Please see our Knowledgebase for more information: http://support.envato.com/index.php?/Knowledgebase/List Our team Review Also provided These comments:
Unfortunately your submission does meet our current minimum technical requirements for the quality category it was to Stumbleupon. Please consider taking some time to Familiarize yourself with our current library and quality levels of popular items before resubmitting.
We appreciate your submission and look forward to seeing your future submissions.someone .. any advice?
Yeah. just what Demorfoza said in the other topic and I add, don’t post the same thing multiple times. Creating one single topic for a single problem is the best way to get the best result.