The scene looks really nice but there doesn’t seem to be enough movement for me, also a little too heavy on the particles?
if you went a little close on some of the images i think that would help too.
no idea,,, i think its pretty great. Just bad luck on which reviewer you got perhaps?
I liked it, i think a few variations in the same style would be overall very useful.
wow that was really nice!
Maybe the pictures are a little too small and too few?
Last title is also pretty small?
maybe a few different camera shots/angles rather than a continuous shot could be worth considering.
I hope it gets accepted!
looks ok to me, maybe white text would have been a little easier to read but i’m pretty sure the user would change that easily anyway
your question is not clear :-s
the name under the logo is hidden a bit in the last frame.
the colors are a little odd, not sure they really look tron-ish also not even sure you are allowed to use the name tron?
was it in c4d ?
The labels look great and animate really well….
Only thing i would say to change is the footage they are over, its really hard to see the label fully, maybe something a little more contrasting in terms of color ?
I think it looks good, my only negative thought about it is that it limits logos to a square shape.
have you tried to see what it looks like if the shapes that shatter/brake from the ground where a little more non uniform? Like something smashing up through the ground would really create?
I would say that its unlikely to be accepted unless you make it much more unique somehow… but since i am not a reviewer i wouldn’t know for sure of course