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i need more feedback
nice work
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atwozfree says

Typography needs work, spacing needs work, you need to tweak the contrast in places and polish everything up, it’s not at the current standard.

Thanks All I will.

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Hi Guys, Give me some feed back on this template http://atwozfree.orgfree.com/demo/ Thanks :)

Screenshot check the screenshot please, you have spacing issues and apart from that consider on typography please,

having a 40 px h1 just above 16px h2 doesnt really seem fine to me for a reader

for example the ” our portfolio section” i read our portfolio and then saw “Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit.” just under it, i saw it because i kinda was checking the template work rather than the content but if i was a visitor, i would have missed that text and it seems as being some important element since it is a h2 heading tag, which we would probably be using to place our keywords with some white hat seo as it is very important for search engines to see and if we place our targeted main keywords in a text it must also be important for our visitors, since white hat seo is targeting the visitor experiences rather than keyword stuffing and all other black hat techniques
Thanks gokhan214 i will do :) and update you.
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atwozfree says

Hi Guys,

Give me some feed back on this template http://atwozfree.orgfree.com/demo/

Thanks :)

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atwozfree says

Hi guys!

I’m pretty new on ThemeForest, but I’m a Front-end developer for over 5 years. I’ve been working on my first HTML template for about 2 months and got rejected at the end. The worst thing is that I got generic rejection reason, which I think is quite bad to all contributors.

I talked to some colleagues and they all said that they think reviewers were hard on me, especially with no explanation.

I would be grateful if some of you more experienced guys could take a look and point me to the direction I need to go? Here it is:

http://www.front-man.com/tf/flatline

I know it definitely isn’t “top class” template, but I’ve seen much much worse accepted and that’s whats confusing me most…

Thanks in advance to all of you :)
w3 Error problem
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.front-man.com%2Ftf%2Fflatline%2F&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline&group=0&user-agent=W3C_Validator%2F1.3+http%3A%2F%2Fvalidator.w3.org%2Fservices
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atwozfree says

nice work but I think not unique.

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atwozfree says

Lack of originality, typography is way off, spacing issues

Thanks charlie4282
i will do and show you :)

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atwozfree says

It looks to plain, you need to add something that will make it more interesting and to stand out… Don’t like the heading type, looks weird with the rest of the content, also contrast on contact section is very poor.. You should polish it more :). Good luck :)

Thanks i will do and show you :)

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atwozfree says


still need a lot of work typography not good, spacing and alignment need more attention

thanks i will do

hi any one ???

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