Your shadows are too dark and the text spacing is way off.
You’re never going to get a template approved with this kind of attitude. If they reject it more than 3 times, scrap the design and start over. With the design world constantly demanding better, and more creative outlooks on websites, it’s safe to say you’re going to have to come up with something more original.
I hate to say it, but the design needs to be scrapped. Take a look at a few inspirational web design sites to help guide you through the process of creating an unprecedented theme.
If it was soft rejected you would see it on the Themeforest server.
The shadow on the box elements do not make sense, the menu is over-sized, the second set of boxes’ content is compressed and the slider needs to be slowed down.
Hope this helps. Good luck.
To be 100% honest, this design needs to be scrapped. There’s no possible way you could improve upon the current design and actually have a chance of getting approved.
I know this sounds harsh, but that’s ThemeForest for you!
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It needs more features. There are a shit load of these simplistic, straight-to-the-point themes in the marketplace already. Spice it up! Add some cool text effects when you hover, or a slide-to navigation.