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charlie4282 says

With all due respect, coming soon really does not suit PSD categories – there just isn’t enough to it.

For what its worth it is along way from ready. The fundamentals are a long way off with a lot of work needed with the typography, hierarchy, spacing and margins and consistency.

Images are stretched and pixelated

No logo, header or footer

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charlie4282 says

Link?

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charlie4282 says

^ Now that would be a partnership!!

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You will need to get access to the account that bought the file by using the relevant logins. My guess is this is the person you built it for you’s details.

Otherwise you will have buy a new copy/license of the file

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charlie4282 says

Concept is cool – work on typography (especially in portfolio), spacing (e.g. nav/logo from main image in item pages, essay post titles, images and copy are inconsistently spaced out), spacing on the timeline posts ( inconsistent margins)

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charlie4282 says

With all due respect this is a long way off the standard.

the fundamentals are really lacking

colors don’t really work and too many

images stretched

inconsistent margins and spacing

typography needs a ton of work

shadows on text are wrong

clients box needs rethinking

really you need to think basics of design first

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charlie4282 says

I agree – in the last post people mentioned adding something different and finalizing typography ( especially services and team member blurb). It is better but still too much like others and not enough attention to detail for PSD category

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charlie4282 says

Validation issues and is way too similar to others on here.

You need to find something to make it stand out more and focus on attention to detail (especially typography, consistency, hierachy and spacing).

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