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chrisatlemon
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Well done :)

You may want to remove the link, self promotion is not allowed so it will get removed in any case…

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You seem to have the grunge texture not only in the background, but also applied to the screen? Is that on purpose?

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I would suggest that rejected for a couple of reasons:

1) the shape doesn’t actually look much like a flame at all, it looks more like a leaf

2) maybe three nested shapes is too much and gets to confusing

3) the relation between the size of the shape and the size of the text is out of balance, the shape Is much too big

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chrisatlemon
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On the contrary, I think the items forum is actually busier than this one. And it will get moved there in any case…

If this is a brochure, do you not also want to show the insides? at the moment I would take the top picture, but I don’t think the difference is really that big.

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chrisatlemon
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I’ve been thinking about this one. I don’t think there’s anything wrong with it, it will surely get accepted … I just don’t like it as much personally, your others are nicer … but that’s just personal :)

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chrisatlemon
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if you resell, then you need to purchase the extended licence. Integrating a graphic you purchased into a design you create is considered as reselling.

I think an exception would be add-ons such as brushes or actions. There you cannot actually buy an extended licence and the regular licence covers one installation on your system. You can then use that installation to make use of the add-on/action to enhance your item.

Anyone correct me if I’m wrong with this, that’s how I understand it.

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I think it looks great and unique! Good job!

One thing I can’t make my mind up is the noise/grunge on the background. I’m not sure if it had substance or detracts from clarity … Otherwise: very nice!

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The shape is nice, but altogether it looks a bit bland and monochrome.

Also I’m not too keen on the font choice. Looks very bold and blocky.

Altogether I think the design lacks life, it’s to be a bit more funky!

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1) the lines for the coffee cup rim and coffee cup body are not connected cleanly at the top right. At least it looks like this in the preview. Also maybe the smoke goes a little too high and makes it to vertical?

2) I guess the second one is just a little too simple. Also the arrow shaped look a little fuzzy.

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There is too much going on in this logo. You want one clear icon image, not several. Just the flower on its own is already a little complicated with the fine lines, actor that the rest of the shapes and it gets confusing quickly.

Also the gradient on the word “paradise” is not great in my opinion.

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