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chrisatlemon says

I would still work the typography. Now it’s all a bit samey samey. I think that’s “wisdom script”? I wouldn’t use it for all. I think at the bottom it’s nicer than the social URLs. Maybe try some straighter type there.

I’d like to see a completely different colour on the icons. Just for comparison sake as logic tells me there’s nothing wrong with the blue there, but looking at it somehow bugs me :)

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chrisatlemon says

Good job djeep :)

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chrisatlemon says

Personally I like it. Since this places so saturated with flyers it’s also often a subjective you by the reviewer that may decide where they get accepted or not.

so apart from the fact that I do like it I could imagine criticism for:

1) “Club Future” blending into much with the background and the rest of the colours. If I was the owner of club future I would like it to stand out a little more

2) the main text font is not spectacular

3) it may be a little too empty, too simple

However these are just things I can imagine to be said. Personally I think it’s nice. The job.

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chrisatlemon says

I think the line is not a smooth curve. It looks like it has a dent in there. I would assume that’s what the reviewer meant and fixing that one take away from the simplicity of the line.

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chrisatlemon says

Well, did you try what I Suggested?

:)

Chris

PS: sorry about the double post, seems like I got the jitters :D

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chrisatlemon says

Well, did you try what I Suggested?

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chrisatlemon says

Of course you can change the resolution. But it also depends a bit on what kind of file you working with.

If it’s pure vector file in photoshop for example then all you have to do is go to image size and change to 300 dpi.

If you have for geography in their menu may need to update the photos with higher res versions.

For more precise instructions we really need to know what you’re working with.

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chrisatlemon says

ALL CAPS are considered shouting in “netiquette” :)

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chrisatlemon says
PatrikL said
EDIT : Chris beat me to it :)

Photo finish! :D

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chrisatlemon says

I like the feel of it, but yes it is hard to get to the information.

Also I don’t like the sentences around it.

In general I like the idea, already because Were a bit saturated herewith the usual glossy, glowy style Flyers. I like clean and simple, but of course for that it has to be perfect :

Keep chopping away at it, definitely worth the effort!

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Chris

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