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I try to make sure I catch all new items, so I check that the reviewer speed :)

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Actually most relevant things are wrong with this:

1) typography: Apart from the font choice not been great that doesn’t seem to be a line you follow: what should be font choice for a title? What would be the font size for title?

You seem to mix them up randomly.

2) spacing: spacing, margins, paddings of all the various elements. They seem to be just patched together there is no clear picture here

3) line height: text blocks and especially title blocks line heights are completelty off

4) margins and paddings of all elements: does it really look well aligned to you?

5) organisation, again there is no clear line here. You seem to just makes up elements without any sort of hierachy

6) read up on “whitespace”

In short, this needs addressing almost all elements in creating a layout.

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I think it’s very nice. One comment: the knobs with the white tops seem just a little blurry in the hi res version. Maybe you could clean that up a little.

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Basically saying that it’s not good enough, just a nice words.

I think that it looks nice on the zoom and the really big close-ups. In smaller versions the detail gets lost quite quickly and you can’t really make out what it supposed to be. Maybe that was one of the criteria why he rejected the file.

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If you just resubmitted the same file, then it will get rejected again for the same reason. You need to address whatever the reviewer asked you. A soft rejection is usually pretty quick to fix.

maybe you could let us see the rejection Message and we may help you understand what it meant.

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I would look at spacing and white space here. I don’t thing the alignment quite clicks. The logo on the right hand side to near the top and the address to near the bottom. Try balancing it out.

Good work on the logo – nice! :)

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There is simply not enough the to make this item stand out. If you lo for ultra clean then every line and especially font choice has to be perfect. I don’t think it is in this case…

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I think this looks really nice! I don’t know why you would receive criticism for the font choice on this item. I think it fits perfectly.

I saw it this morning and thought that maybe it’s me who doesn’t get why this would get rejected. But seeing the other replies here I can only agree! Thumbs up!

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Sarcasm? :P

I don’t think so! I thought the same. Just work on the details a little and take what the reviewer said as a guide. This will be a nice item.

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Well, the first thing would be to consider the feedback to that.

If you look at the background it’s this big flat red space which makes the entire top half of the flyer pretty bland to look at.

The offset frames also look to be just simple lines and could probably do with a little detail.

I do like the bit with the heart, but maybe you could try to make the text on it blend into the heart, or adopt the shape kind of wrapping around it.

The heart of the top is also very flat and lacks detail.

So if you keep the girl, keep the heart and the bottom half not work on details on the top half and background I think you would get a lot further towards a nice file.

All in all this is definitely something you can work with.

Good luck

Chris

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