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chrisatlemon
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I would look at spacing and white space here. I don’t thing the alignment quite clicks. The logo on the right hand side to near the top and the address to near the bottom. Try balancing it out.

Good work on the logo – nice! :)

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There is simply not enough the to make this item stand out. If you lo for ultra clean then every line and especially font choice has to be perfect. I don’t think it is in this case…

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I think this looks really nice! I don’t know why you would receive criticism for the font choice on this item. I think it fits perfectly.

I saw it this morning and thought that maybe it’s me who doesn’t get why this would get rejected. But seeing the other replies here I can only agree! Thumbs up!

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Sarcasm? :P

I don’t think so! I thought the same. Just work on the details a little and take what the reviewer said as a guide. This will be a nice item.

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Well, the first thing would be to consider the feedback to that.

If you look at the background it’s this big flat red space which makes the entire top half of the flyer pretty bland to look at.

The offset frames also look to be just simple lines and could probably do with a little detail.

I do like the bit with the heart, but maybe you could try to make the text on it blend into the heart, or adopt the shape kind of wrapping around it.

The heart of the top is also very flat and lacks detail.

So if you keep the girl, keep the heart and the bottom half not work on details on the top half and background I think you would get a lot further towards a nice file.

All in all this is definitely something you can work with.

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Slide into 2012 safely everyone! :)

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Happened to me once, too: one of the layers in a brochure of mine was called “logo”. I simply had to replace the layer name with “your logo here” and the matter was resolved.

I assume it must be something similar for you.

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Honestly, I think they look nice! I know that doesn’t help much in improving … but I actually like them …

Maybe the back side is a bit empty and simple. Other than that I think they are nice…

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I think the concept as such is quite nice.

I’m not so sure about the round things circling the centre element? What are they? They look a bit like golden snowflakes … Personally I would do without them.

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If you search for “music icons” he will also find some useful items here at GR.

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