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designsatnight says

I don’t think they hate you.

I got mine rejected too so read my post appropriately, but my op on your theme is this

- too dark. maybe it’s a monitor calibration problem, but on my screen everything is almost black.

- the slideshow pictures with those browser icons are great, but remember that these won’t be used by the buyer, so don’t build your themes design on them

- rollover effects are cool

I think you should install an empty wordpress, write some posts without the images you created, and take a look. Maybe you get closer to what you want to know.

all the best

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designsatnight says

Here’s an alternate home page with a full width slider

LINK

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designsatnight says

Hey BTW i did not know you are Hungarian. Cool Man i am too. Checked out your portfolio.

Cheers

Lester

Wow it seems we’re everywhere haha

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designsatnight says

Hey

If you look at your readmore links the space above them is all over the place some have too much space some have less they have to be consistent.

Also I would get rid of the social icons on the right and move the search bar up to where the second logo is on the right/ header. Make the slider full width.

I would get rid of the most popular part and line up the rest with the latest news.

Also your logo on the left: make the slogan under the logo the same width as the rest of it.

Cheers

Lester

a big thank you I’ma try that

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designsatnight says
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designsatnight says

can anybody of you guys point out to me where’s the problem with white spaces? aren’t consistent, or misbalanced?

or is it too “boxed”?

thank you

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designsatnight says

your logo looks bad too, it’s not readable almost white on white.

and the search icon is out by 20px at least, not in line with the menu’s right side.

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designsatnight says

by visual hierarchy, I mean that the front page don’t have focus points. you have to decide where you want to direct the attention. use element sizes to clearly show their importance.

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designsatnight says
198seven said
here you can see the live preview of my rejected theme http://www.198seven.com/naqsh_premium_template please tell me now what should i have to do ?? :(

look since they rejected mine too maybe I’m not the best one to ask but I’d 1 – give some more space to your logo, its too close to the menu 2- the visual hierarchy is confusing, I don’t know what to read. decide where you want to direct the readers attention 3 – the search bars right side is out of the layout 4- OUR WORK and the FEATURED text below , hierarchy again. if the featured text is a lower level title then show it by decreasing the font size. same goes to the menu

if the reader finds too many texts to read, almost with the same size then they wont find the starting point and navigate away.

hope it helps

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designsatnight says
rohithpaul said
designsatnight said
updated http://www.thysta.com/helion/test/
It seems like you have modified some stuff’s but, still white space issue is there, You must go through other templates and u’ll get inspiration, I know its frustrating, but my advice – If you submit the current one, you will get disappointed again. :)

Seems like I dont get this white space stuff.

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