try to add some lights and shadows to separate every single layer. the monkey seems to be attached to other elements. basic idea it’s great … don’t worry and go straight!
hi, for the second link you posted I think you could add more depth on the text and improve the style and type of the footer box.
I think it’s good. I also think that probably need more improvement on type and make it more rich with details and other stylish object
In my opinion the flyer is really good, you could work on the text on the footer … the center of the image it’s perfect!
Nice treatment, except what ShermanJackson already said I think you have add more realism on the shadows of the ananas and try some different type.
After 1 week from my fist approved submission I made some improvements. Envato team reply me “nice! thanks a lot”.
What I learned? If you make your item more beautiful and useful Envato team will only be happy!
Wow, I was out of office for some days, sorry.
Thanks to dekurvajo, I think that the price is right … why? Because someone buy an app icon design, probably has intention to sell his app so 8$ is a good solutions. On twitter or other social there are a lot of developer that has ability to make the engine of an app but they don’t care about design.
Thanks also to anchor_point_heshan, your opinion it’s really interesting. After 3/4 days I realized that my item was under “icon” main category but not under the right category. When envato changed this, selling began to rise. Now there are 2 pages of new item before my submission … I hope that people will do some click! Instead, I’am trying to get some review (I’ve changed the preview image) because I made 24 sales but … any stars!!!
Thank you very much!
Beautiful improvements, I think that you could change the font of the main text and make some little adjustment with the leading and tracking. Looks good!
Hi twobrain Thank you very much for your opinion. I was just wondering if I could made something better to obtain more sales. It’s true that we are not here to became rich but sales makes us happy so since I am a newbie I am really interested to improve my work to make more sales.
I’ll wait studying the sales trend and at the end of the first month I’ll get conclusions about my first submission.