increase the line height and spacing of the logo slogan where it sais;
Be the change that you wish to see in the world.
and maybe add some more content at the bottom of the home page and go for it, if it is not approved, i ll cut my hands off 
if you wanna work on this template, before everything make the background fixed
i think your logo, social icons are way simple + psd cathegory is allways harder to be approved than the others, also move your social icons 2 pixels down, this is all i can see, i am not a perfect designer either, yet, i also need suggestions from some pros when i try as well
özer krdsim menüyü daha gösterisli yapmani tavsiye ederim, teman güzel, birde heading lerde farkli bir renk dene derim, öne çikar yazilarini biraz, yaz?lar yerine resimlere odaklanma sorununu kaldir ortadan.
sorry guys, i told him my suggestions in our language, here is the translation for you all;
i d recommend making the menu a bit more flashy, your template is beatiful and also i d say try a different color variation for the headings, put your texts a bit forward, take focusing problem on the pictures instead of the texts
i think you were right and i made some changes
am_themes said
Very nice looking. I’d make the text a bit darker and perhaps a bit bigger if I were you. It’s light colors on a light bg and it kind of carries you away to keep staring at the pictures. If they reject it you might want to try a darker blue for the UI elements as well.
thank you for your suggestion, i hope, i will not be coding it for nothing 
Thanks
plus it is accepted as a .psd template :s, i am weirded out with you, too 
Hi Guys, the previous version of my template looked horrible and i made some changes, i just need some suggestions please, start all over and delete this or try further with this, it is only .psd template not coded yet but i see no point of coding it, if i get bad suggestions again, link is below;
