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hi guys, could you just judge the typography on my theme please, all i wanna know is where i am with my typography, only honest opinions please! here is the demo;

Demo

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to be honest as the reviewer well explained, it is not there yet, i know how heart breaking it is when your hard work is just thrown away within seconds like this but once you get there and look back, you will understand why not, to give you a very good example, i suggest you to check the following demo links of my works;

Number one ( what makes me laugh a lot everytime i see it, uploaded it 2 years ago and of course rejected as it deserves it :) )

Number two ( which i am working on and not sure if i am there,yet )

Just see the difference between them as typography and visual hierarchy then you will understand what you are missing with your theme

Demo 1

Demo 2

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Hi folks, i am trying to improve my typography skills as much as i can, the template i have created is below, please share your honest opinions with me;

Demo

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I’m building a coming soon page, i didn’t finish yet, i need to change and add a few things, but the structure is already done, i would like to receive some advices to improve my template. My first coming soon template was hardly rejected, i changed everything, i have been working during 2 weeks. What do i need to change here? http://www.geocities.ws/tctheme/ Thanks

it looks pretty to me but i d say, different color instead of pink, ummm maybe a nice orangish color would match better and also when you click on menu, opening divs should have no opacity on the background so it will not seem messed up with the main content, yeah id say pitch black would look better on the sliding div backgrounds, maybe also change the “Halant” to some nicer font type

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first nothing new in your item. unfinished footer. social media hover looks soo oldstyle. sticky nav so thing put some space. there is a problem on your portfolio grids. 4th columns looks broken.

for now thats it

good luck dostum:)
thanks you dostum, i agree with you on all the issues you pointed at and i just noticed that i have the issue with the portfolio’s 4th column on 1024 px screen, i ll work on the issues cheers, all i really wanted to know was typography, as we all know design isnt really the biggest part of the work because everyone can imagine and get the colors togther really i d say but typography was a big headache for me and again i agree with you, there is nothing new on my item and thats why i wouldnt upload it, all i did was checking all approved items one by one for months and days just to learn about typography readiblity really and i think i passed it since nobody is mentioning about the typography :D
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jarvis inspiration?

what kind of comment is that, once you mentioned “jarvis” has been the first time i looked up for it, what is that similar between my template and jarvis? but thanks for your comment anyways, it tells me i passed the typography, all i wanted to know was about my typography :) not uniqueness, if i thought it was unique i d say i am going to upload it :)

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Hi guys, i am not really going to upload this template but i would like to know where i am with my skills, so could you please share some honest opinions, am i far from the point or nearly there yet?

Demo Link

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Neither does a display: none; If the visitor has JS disabled the element will always be hidden, use jQuery’s .show() and .hide() methods, if the visitor has JS disabled the elements gracefully fall back to being shown globally without compromising the user experience.

Yeah very true, thanks for sharing your knowledge with us iKreativ and o yeah surely i accept that i should have thought this as well as i knew it but forgeting things sometimes is also being knowledge poor as myself but thanks to anybody that shares the honest opinions everytime i ask for feedbacks rather than directing me to a lots of work for nothing :) hopefully well understood :D

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Even I don’t want to waste my time on this so its better to stop it here. Keep thinking whatever you want to. PEACE
yeah and opacity will make anything invisible with an empty space that appears so ugly but display:none with a jquery call will make everything appear nicely you know? this is my opacity knowledge, so use opacity in a way that ll appear nicely then, sorry but just been honest
What are you talking about?

he was telling that i didnt know what opacity is all i know is opacity:0 makes no sense for an element that ll appear with a scroll down and before scrolling down it looks like an empty no needed space which seems being totally unrelated to anything on a website but it is fine, no need to discuss, it is my bad that i wanted to share my honest opinions and got someone offended

and i also added ok PEACE

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and ok PEACE

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