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gokhan214 says

@gokhan214 I think image is not load proper on your PC other wise on whole site text is readable without draging mouse over :) if u get any where then post screenshot here

right click on open picture on another window to see it better screenshot

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gokhan214 says

Start by changing the background and right after that the logo. They don’t look good!

would you count this as an improvement of the background and the “menu”?

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gokhan214 says





PS : Do not ‘mix’ different designs onto a page unless the outcome is better. From what I see, the navigation bar certainly does not fit in your current design
It looks like it’s dropped from somewhere (tutorial or something)
Hmm…not sure about that. Maybe I did read something similar in some articles in the past, but the sentence just came into my mind when I was replying.
rvision means the style of the nav looks like it’s from a tutorial, not your sentence.
Ah… I thought the ‘it’ refers to the quoted text instead of the navigation bar :p I do think ‘it’ looks like it’s from a tutorial though.
it is not from a tutorial, i created it on a menu creator and then styled it with an online gradient tool and yes i do agree with you all about that it doesnt fit with the design and i think i know where i do mistake, not that i am not good at photoshop or that i cant do psd to html but i am kinda lazy and imaginationless when it comes to photoshop designing :)

but thanks for your all advices apart from guessing where the menu comes from ^ and i also have never been reading a single tutorial in my life ever ^, i dont have a long web designing story to tell in my past, my learning style is just analyzing the codes around and understanding, never watched a single tutorial and never been reading a single article :D

and i never told i was perfect, if i thought so i would not be asking here on the forum, i d probably have redstar with blue around where it said power elite author under my profile ^, thanks for advices and what i all needed to know was, if anyone told about white space or sort typography problems, which i have had after my first template, i d be sad, actually nice to know that i am one step further ^

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gokhan214 says

Everything need to improve in design from top to bottom. Font’s, background, elements, headings, color. your design need more more more more work & efforts
thanks for your comments but i would like to ask you something, it is not to be rude, it is just because i wanna learn

on your this template >>> LINK <<<

at the very bottom, where it sais what our clients say, i cant read the content without draging mouse over the text and covering it all in blue, so my question is, i am trying to understand the typography logic, readiblity problems and how to sort them, i seriously ask because i wanna learn, not that i am kidding, please dont get offended. what do we excatly look for with the eyes of a client that goes on the website but does not know about the critics of web designing?

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gokhan214 says

The artwork side needs a lot of improvement. inconsistent grid & typography, not so nice colors…

could you please detail it a bit more about grid and typography?

could you inform by excluding the our services section please

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gokhan214 says

i dont know, if i am opening the thread on the right section of the forums but i tried item disccussion twice, didnt get any responde

i recently started creating a template.Before i go deep in project, i would like to get some advises, negative and positive all appreciated link is below;

DEMO LINK

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gokhan214 says

i am not really professional but what i see so far with your template is;

use a more serious looking font, change twit background to the same as counter numbers background

change that blackboard looking background to a plain gradient background under “what to expect”

take notify me (stay updated) column to the center and take location to the right

and use image instead of ” | ” as a seperator at the bottom links and make those links a bit more visible

and improve the text contrast

but then again, i am not a professional

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gokhan214 says

guys, please some advices, i just wanna know, if i am getting better with the typography?

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gokhan214 says

Hi everyone, i recently started creating a template.Before i go deep in project, i would like to get some advises, negative and positive all appreciated link is below;

DEMO LINK

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gokhan214 says

guys come on pls give some advices

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