Posts by gokhan214

kops said
Menu items too small

Everything’s too grey and faded – nothing stands out

The ‘Look Now’ banner – kill that font, kill it with fire.

The dual blue/grey colouring of the titles doesn’t work.

Try not to use stock images of happy smiley office people – they are overused and clichéd.

thanks bro, finally somebody who can comment

RubenBristian said

gokhan214 said
i would like to have some suggestions before i finish drawing and start coding it

delete. start from scratch.

what a comment is this? start from scratch, what you are viewing is allready a scratch by the way it is not coded, did you read before you sent a post?

first of all this is only an image, this is a psd uploaded, no animations nothing there, what i have in my mind isnt in your mind, do you have any ideas about how the site will load what the menu will animate like, what the slider is going to be like? do not judge the design, i was asking about typography, colors and such things, same design isnt good for everyone and that s why there millions of different designs on themeforest

guys i wasnt asking about how design looks, i am asking to tell me what issues there are,

e.g. typography, colors, e.t.c.

can you tell me what made you delete please? suggestion = targeting what s missed what is good and what s not

Hello everyone, i started drawing my new template in psd and i would like to have some suggestions before i finish drawing and start coding it

here is the demo :

DEMO

too big fonts, use smaller fonts to make it look clean and watch out for spacing

cmeegama said
Hello gokhan214,

From what I see I have noticed the following issues on the design : Search field text does not align vertically Slides does not align with the two grey borders around it Black text on the read more buttons does not work Need a lot of work design to make it more appealing Source code has issues as well e.g inline styling Try to follow 960 grid system

Having said these I am new here and recommend wait for other expert advice before making any changes.

Good luck!

slider is excatly 5px from top bottom left and right,

search text is excatly 8px from top and bottom

take a screenshot and take a closer look in photoshop tho

and on which slider did you get that issue?

i ll be really happy to get some ideas after the changes i made, please dont mind the footer, yet. Link is below;

DEMO LINK

just checked your pages, i am sorry, havent seen them earlier but still you r missing a contact page, the business you choosed requires deffinitly a contact page and the buyer will buy a theme will deffinitly look for it and also increase the line heights between the pharagraphes and watch out for white-space