sorry but, what you try to put in the themeforest market place is a template which i would not be calling bad but only 2 pages there, blog and home page, you did not make even a contact page, if the buyers were expert enough to create so many pages themselves, why should you spend money and buy somebody’s work? think wise please, if it was so easy, i would have got at least 1000 templates accepted by themeforest and be rich by now, themeforest is themeforest because of rejections, remember that, i uploaded only one template in a year time, not that i could not finish more, of course yes, in my real life,i look after my family by building websites but my latest project i am working on, when i put it next to the first one i uploaded and compare, i have a big laugh on my face because of the fun i have from what i wanted from kailoon when i uploaded my first template, no way, that template should never be sold between so many amazing works, even this new one i am not sure about, take a look and understand themeforest quality and be happy mate here is what i am not sure about;
so dont be sad with a rejection, that s gonna bring an improvement into your style, by the way i did like some features of your template, you have got the soul of an author mate just keep it up, one day you will have the goal ^^
nice design, nice typography but no extra feature that would make me buy this template, also colorless and no content to show up, how it ll look like when it s filled, just an opinion, sorry dont take me wrong please
improve your typography and sharpen your box shadow effects all over, they are too strong when blured and integrate some jquery effects into your design as lightbox for the thumbnails, e.t.c., use some better fonts and watch out for white space
Buttons looks fine, maybe the animation is too complex for just a button, sometimes is a better a simple on/off effect, and put your “animation” efforts on big media elements. Anyway, i would try to use a simpler typography scheme, i think just two fonts (1 for titling, one for body texts) is necessary. It will make the whole design more solid. Just my two cents.
thanks for the opinion, i was thinking actually the same, apart from the banner line, i changed the fonts, especially menu was bothering tho, can you take a look again please?
Very nice looking template. If I were you I wouldn’t change the social buttons (but maybe resize a little and use different placement). I think they blend in with the overall look. The Read More buttons could use a little more right and left padding, and with a slightly sharper shadow (like the Learn More button) they should be good to go. Just my opinion.
thank very much for your advices, i hope it ll get accepted after i finish ^^
I’m working on my first Theme and I’m trying to find somewhere to find an iPhone image that I can use on themes that doesn’t restrict me from using it on ThemeForest… I’m having trouble finding one though, would anyone be willing to help me out and letting me know a good place to find them? Thanks in advice! (If this is in the wrong section I’m sorry Mods I wasn’t sure where this would go)
go on ebay and find one of them fake iphone sellers, they put their product pictures looks the same as iphone but they sell fake, so feel free to steal from them ^^