Posts by gokhan214

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gokhan214
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Hi, I have tried to uploaded a new PSD template but it has been rejected. The PSD is a vcard resume template. I think the design has a good aesthetic. You can view the design here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/9pgkz6tlb8tcf0t/02_Home_slider_images.jpg

The Review team provided these comments:
Your template has a good start, unfortunately, due to our high requirements your template is not ready for the PSD template category. This suits better in Site Templates, it has potential to be accepted but it may require more improvements before it’s approved under another category. Your are not providing an unpleasant template but the PSD category requires higher quality in terms of aesthetics.

I’m desperate. What can I improve? What do you advise me?

Thanks and sorry for my English
i mean it looks good, if you code it, it ll probably get approved and sold but as i said, as a psd it hasnt got the feeling that is given to a developer as; “oh look at this, never saw anything like that, i need to grab that and code it”
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if you know the technique the easiest to get approved with is allways a psd template but if you dont know it is the most difficult, with psd one thing you should allways keep in mind, it has to be something what a developer would wanna grab and code, if it is something what allready exist there as coded to html even to wordpress and joomla lately, i mean if there is allready something similar to it but which is coded, so why buying a psd template

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if i was you, i would stay away from bootstrap starters and do a work from scratch

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For instance, 25px top and 25px bottom doesn’t make it right, you need to use your eyes, it needs to flow, call to actions need to demand attention etc..

i think, i got what you mean, i ll throw this anyways :D, i ll create a new one :)

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The same as before. For instance, 25px top and 25px bottom doesn’t make it right, you need to use your eyes, it needs to flow, call to actions need to demand attention etc..

25px? :S paddings are 50px for every section :S 50 to top 50 to bottom :S

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You need to make significant changes, small incremental changes aren’t going to swing it.

well all i wanna know is spacings actually :) design isnt a problem, i wanna be sure about spacing thing and typography, i dont care much about the design, how r the spacings now?

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Some Feedback on the updated version please, i ll be happy if iKreativ gives some feedback especially Updated Demo

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Honestly mate, the changes you’re making aren’t significant enough and unless you make some big changes and perfect the hierarchy, this ain’t getting approved.

No worries, some big changes are coming :) just wait and see, i ll get this theme approved believe me :D

i wont give up :)

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iKreativ is right about the hierarchy, there is also a lot of validation issues that will only get worse if you don’t fix them before coding anything else, footer is incomplete, header elements don’t align, portfolio rollover needs rethinking, typography needs work throughout

thanks for the feedback, i also did not really like the portfolio :D that was the moment that my imagination was dead :), by the way, it is valid now, i was going to fix the validation errors at the end but you are right, no need to save them :)

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A screenshot wont help, its all of it, you have different spacing everywhere, nothing is uniform and it doesn’t flow.

ok let me make it clear then, spacing = margin, padding,line-height, word-spacing,letter-spacing, which one do you mean?

and if you meaned margin and padding top bottom then you better take a screenshot and place the screenshot in photoshop and re-check if there is a different spacing

I dont need to measure it in Photoshop to know that the spacing is off, I can see it.

Spacing and visual hierarchy is much more than trying to line something up with a grid, you can line it up pixel perfect to a grid and it will still look wrong.

Design is visual, you look at it, this is how you make sure everything looks right, not with rulers.

Screenshot

and this is how it looks by my side, clear your cache please

http://awesomescreenshot.com/0eb2dneef6
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