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gokhan214 says

if i was you, i would stay away from bootstrap starters and do a work from scratch

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gokhan214 says

For instance, 25px top and 25px bottom doesn’t make it right, you need to use your eyes, it needs to flow, call to actions need to demand attention etc..

i think, i got what you mean, i ll throw this anyways :D, i ll create a new one :)

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gokhan214 says

The same as before. For instance, 25px top and 25px bottom doesn’t make it right, you need to use your eyes, it needs to flow, call to actions need to demand attention etc..

25px? :S paddings are 50px for every section :S 50 to top 50 to bottom :S

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gokhan214 says

You need to make significant changes, small incremental changes aren’t going to swing it.

well all i wanna know is spacings actually :) design isnt a problem, i wanna be sure about spacing thing and typography, i dont care much about the design, how r the spacings now?

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gokhan214 says

Some Feedback on the updated version please, i ll be happy if iKreativ gives some feedback especially Updated Demo

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gokhan214 says

Honestly mate, the changes you’re making aren’t significant enough and unless you make some big changes and perfect the hierarchy, this ain’t getting approved.

No worries, some big changes are coming :) just wait and see, i ll get this theme approved believe me :D

i wont give up :)

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gokhan214 says

iKreativ is right about the hierarchy, there is also a lot of validation issues that will only get worse if you don’t fix them before coding anything else, footer is incomplete, header elements don’t align, portfolio rollover needs rethinking, typography needs work throughout

thanks for the feedback, i also did not really like the portfolio :D that was the moment that my imagination was dead :), by the way, it is valid now, i was going to fix the validation errors at the end but you are right, no need to save them :)

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gokhan214 says



A screenshot wont help, its all of it, you have different spacing everywhere, nothing is uniform and it doesn’t flow.

ok let me make it clear then, spacing = margin, padding,line-height, word-spacing,letter-spacing, which one do you mean?

and if you meaned margin and padding top bottom then you better take a screenshot and place the screenshot in photoshop and re-check if there is a different spacing

I dont need to measure it in Photoshop to know that the spacing is off, I can see it.

Spacing and visual hierarchy is much more than trying to line something up with a grid, you can line it up pixel perfect to a grid and it will still look wrong.

Design is visual, you look at it, this is how you make sure everything looks right, not with rulers.

Screenshot

and this is how it looks by my side, clear your cache please

http://awesomescreenshot.com/0eb2dneef6
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gokhan214 says

Some more feedbacks please on Demo

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gokhan214 says

well anyways, as i mentioned before, that s your cache, clear your cache because none of those spaces are the way they are on your screenshot

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