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graphicmind says

Abandon it. Sorry but you are way off with fundamental design basics like typography, hierarchy and spacing

that bad huh

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graphicmind says

Pagewiz template rejected

Mobile version

What do you guys think, can I improve this or should I just abandon it?

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graphicmind says

haha it is an actual website

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graphicmind says

I think it is way too cramped.

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graphicmind says

So no coding at all, just drag and drop?

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graphicmind says

Reviewers are great but I still think you are trolling, Enabled.

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graphicmind says

maybe you accidentally deleted it

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graphicmind says


Sorry its nowhere near.

Code needs to validate (esp on a one page site)

Typography needs rethinking

Layout and spacing needs work

Generally it needs to bring more to it to make it compete and be worth paying for

For example consider the attention to detail and creative originality of something like this: http://themeforest.net/item/wordsearch-responsive-404-error-pack/6531230
I think he’s got a fresh idea.. I personally don’t like the one you gave as an example of a good work. graphic mind’s creativity/thinking is better than the other…just the button and color, and perhaps the rest of the typography, but i like the concept of hitting the iceberg. Its funny, and lets you smile, and follow the rest of the instruction. No too much stories like the other one. So graphic mind, you did a creative work, just fine-tune it..

Thanks a lot, that gave me some motivation to try again with this template. Do you have any specific suggestions for button, colors, and typography?

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graphicmind says

Hi graphicmind , I think it need some fix to in Typography , Need some special 404 text , thought about background , and colors , alignment in text and button Good luck graphicmind

Thanks!

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graphicmind says

MVP has a point, sometimes function over design just works. Take this marketplace’s design for instance, it isn’t exactly the most beautiful but it still serves it’s purpose and that’s what matters.

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