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Hi there

you should delete all the social icons/logos which you are actually using on your layout (i.e. facebook, twitter etc). Also on your preview image.

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Hi there In my opinion, it is not really a logo, but it is also just my point of view. I would suggest you to comb trough the logo category of GR. There you will find some really great logos that could be a great inspiration for you. I like your basic idea, but what you are doing out of that, is not the “next level”. Anyway…as I said…it is just my opinion. Cheers

guentherportfolio
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@n2n44: I hear you. Such kind of creations are always depending on your personal touch and what you are liking. I prefer logos with an great idea and a simple visualization. Sometimes it is really easy – like this one from “therealist”

http://graphicriver.net/forums/thread/improving-my-logo/164856

I really like your idea with the pyramid and the pixels. The only thing you should think about is, to bring the idea to a next level (if this is the right word). May be it is better to create something like a mood board and see what this will make with your idea or creation process.

I have a good feeling. Your will create a good logo. Good luck :)

guentherportfolio
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Currently it is too much. A really good logo lives from his simplicity. Try to use only one pyramid and try to work with them. You don’t need to build a final version right now. Breath and lean back – take enough time to think about the whole idea and how you could create a picture language out of that. Good luck :)

guentherportfolio
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Looks good :) I would suggest you to use a different font for the “Our Website is Under Construction.”-Text. Try to use this for example -> http://www.fontsquirrel.com/fonts/pacifico

Next you could use for the numbers another font too. May be this one -> http://www.dafont.com/ds-digital.font

Good luck and keep us in the loop :)

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Hi there

in my opinion the whole idea is really good. But you have to work on the “picture or logo language”. Try to remove the font completely. Then try to give them letters something special. Add an element (for example a pyramid). Try out different things. I always tend to create different ideas, than I usually stop working on the project for a while (couple of days) and than I come back and see what I like and what I could improve. It is important that you are happy with the final result – not others ;)

Good luck.

guentherportfolio
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Self promotion isn’t my intent @Ycz. I believed that ‘Item Discussion’ is open to this type of question. Where is it ‘legal’ to start such topics.
What would you think if I would start a new topic for each of my items, what would you think?

There is no need to discuss about it! The “item discussion” is open for such kind of questions. If you have an other point of view, please open a support ticket and describe your problem. Otherwise…please stop spamming with such kind of comments. Thank you.

guentherportfolio
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Of course…powerpoint could be a kind of a “booster”, but I personally prefer keynote. First try to push your item with a better content and see what happens. If the sales are growing, you could create a powerpoint version too :)

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Hi there

I would say, if I compare your item without judging about the layout, there is a problem with the worth of the package. You only provide 18 slides, where others provide 40 or 50 slides on the same cost. The minimum price in that category is 12$, so try to add more slides and may be you will have more success :) Good luck.

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