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mafloral says

Man that oversized loader kinda freaked me out after awhile. started to hallucinate.

I am on a cable modem and it took me a minute 25 secs to load. After loading it spiked my CPU a bit and crashed my browser.

Need lots of work typo, spacing images, graphics and so on and also another one-page parallax template. Try something new be more original and add some unique features or graphics to make it stand out. Everyone is using the flat stuff because why cus 1000 other people use it too. This kills originality come up with something unique then you do not have to compete with 100 of people.

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

I agree with iKreativ

This is just way off. Lots to do on this and even then i think if i was doing this to scrap it and restart from scratch but before i restart i would design something that has a better look and feel.

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

One page templates, i think there are way too many files already on TF and if your file does not exceed the ones already on there than guess what, well yes yours will not be approved. I said this many times. Everyone is beating a dead horse or if the horse is not dead it needs an army to revive it.

Try to do something original, different layout or something that will stand out, unique features.

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

Hey there

well i mean everyone is beating the same donkey and man this donkey died a few times cus so many people was beating on it. I mean there are a lot of themes and templates with this one page stuff. It’s getting to a point where the marketplace is saturated with these themes and templates and if yours does not out do the ones that are already on TF then you are SOL.

Try something original and unique or add unique features.

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

Cool

The sub menu needs work, just does not look right add some better graphics or animations,

Also you are using an odd shape for the slider nav and some of the image containers. I mean it’s cool but i do not think that it betters your theme.

Also you are using two different hover colors one for the menu and the #B39964 color for the rest of the buttons i would change that color it does not look all that good.

Maybe redesign the logo as well make it a bit better without that #B39964 color.

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

Hey man cool concept just have to polish it and the responsive works great but on phone size the white background is not there that supposed to be all the info on the right.

I think it is a cool theme just have to make it a bit more up to par.

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

I have to agree with iKreativ. I would also change that blue color it just doesn not look good.

Try other fonts, spacing, Contrast and so on there are a lot of things to consider. The design might be good but you can execute it poorly. I also think bootstrap is cool but you cannot just use it out of the box.

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

Congratz dude keep up the good work.

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

Hi there

Well fist i would like to say that you have to come up with something unique. You can do a lot now with jquery and css3 for animation. The one thing reviewers look for is originality in your files being unique from the 10000 other one page layouts and if you do something like that then it must be done better than those already on TF.

You have to carefully select your fonts, color schemes and images. Also making sure that you have no bugs or errors in your file or files. Use comments in your code so buyers can have a better idea on what your code does.

The other big thing is you have to have contrast between the colors you are using. Too white is no good too dark isn’t either.

I would brows through some of the themes and templates on TF and learn from them. Do not copy them but just use some of the aspects to your advantage.

The rest will come but you need a bit of experience so dive in and have fun.

Cheers

Lester

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mafloral says

Well i heard that there was 6 tonnes of gold on the plane. So this would have been the motif. The plane is probably in a hangar or a bunker and the people on might be still alive or maybe dead.

It also could have been an inside job. 1 tonne of gold is around 40 million US dollar so times that by 6. Good enough reason to hijack the plane.

Hopefully all the people are ok and will be let go.

Cheers

Lester

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