Dont use pure colors ( that is what i try to do when creating things ,well yeah there are exceptions but not now)dont use pure black ,add some patterns to the triangles ,the problem wuit ur worck is that now it is better then the first one but is to simple there are allreay products like that ,(maybeah that is why it is rejected) the text ooks god so the only thing to do is add some texture or patterns to the BG or to the circles ,well patterns is what i will put but u can put every thing u want in there … Hope it will get approved.
Yeah for you at the moment creating an perspectiv is important knowing what will people want to see in a flyer ,that is wat you need ,and the only whay to do so is to look at others flyers and combine the knoledge that ou get from thoes worcks to create your own worcks ,that of cours if you allready know how to use ps so that you can recreate the ideas in your head. XD Hope this helps.
When i first sow it I was thincking test exam,the way you placed the objects maybeah is the problem…,i mean where u put the logo and the other sub texts… the font look good…
It is to simple that is the only thing wrong here ,i had seen some magazines that look good in realyty with yelow text…
In the first one I wil ghange the font and add some shine to it . The second one it caynda looks good ,it is simple and it may not be approved becouse of it,maybeah make it more 3d looking like … The last one ,the font I wil change and the boldnes in the arows to . Hope they get approved XD
Yeah as chrisatlemon@ said ,your file is to bold and simple make some depth in your typography and put more detail in the Bg ,maybeah some bokeh stuf.. Hope it will eventualy get approved.
Hmm I’m curious ,what was the problem? o.O
This looks good,but yeah the only thing is that its like basic things, nothing that will impres someone is present in your worck. But as I can see you have some skills that will help you to get it approved. Hope it gets approved.
It is better then the first one that is for shure:D ,but the presents, word is over Morrises’s …..that is wrong …and dont know why but something is off on this flyer it feels like there are just blank collors in it …and i will get rid off that yelow color at the bottom. Hope it gets approved