When i first sow it I was thincking test exam,the way you placed the objects maybeah is the problem…,i mean where u put the logo and the other sub texts… the font look good…
It is to simple that is the only thing wrong here ,i had seen some magazines that look good in realyty with yelow text…
In the first one I wil ghange the font and add some shine to it . The second one it caynda looks good ,it is simple and it may not be approved becouse of it,maybeah make it more 3d looking like … The last one ,the font I wil change and the boldnes in the arows to . Hope they get approved XD
Yeah as chrisatlemon@ said ,your file is to bold and simple make some depth in your typography and put more detail in the Bg ,maybeah some bokeh stuf.. Hope it will eventualy get approved.
Hmm I’m curious ,what was the problem? o.O
This looks good,but yeah the only thing is that its like basic things, nothing that will impres someone is present in your worck. But as I can see you have some skills that will help you to get it approved. Hope it gets approved.
It is better then the first one that is for shure:D ,but the presents, word is over Morrises’s …..that is wrong …and dont know why but something is off on this flyer it feels like there are just blank collors in it …and i will get rid off that yelow color at the bottom. Hope it gets approved
They are to sharp ,that is all i can thinck of XD the first one needs the bevel and embos reduced. Hope it gets approved
Yeah the big text needs to be changed is to round try a sharper one ,that is what i will do ,the rest of the logo is perfect Hope it gets approved.
The first one is to darck and contrasted ,bricks dont look like that.
The 2nd text needs a better font,try one that is not so skinny,just a little bit fat. XD
The last one looks flat the blue goo or whatever it is needs some shiny parts.
That is what i will change ,hope it will get approved