So, I made something similar to the one Scott gave me. You can check it here http://patiss-themes.com/future-landing-page , tested the luck and tried to upload for review process, but got message -
This template is not ready for ThemeForest. Your template does not provide a unique enough design with the necessary design quality, features and options to compete in the marketplace at this time. It requires improvements in term of design, visual hierarchy, typography, layout and its aesthetic quality but most importantly, its uniqueness and how the design is executed.
At this stage in the design I am, unfortunately, not able to provide more specific feedback other than what I’ve stated above (the design needs overall, general improvements). With further improvements I may be able to provide more specific feedback.
Not sure if fault is in the social icons?
I want to thank Scott greatly for his great suggestions, and a demo template, which I didn’t wait 100%. Thanks again!
So, do you think it’s the social icon fault too?
Okay, I’ve had a quick play with your image and here’s a general idea of where you should be heading.
By no means is this ready, still needs a LOT of work but should help you on your way:
I’m without words. I can’t say how much I’m thankful to you. Thanks, thanks, thanks!!!!!
I’ve made some updates, please check and tell how does it look now !
What I did -
1) Fixed background issue.
2) Made changes to logo.
3) Made changes to slider.
4) Removed read more button.
5) Changed seperators.
6) Changed social icons, so it would fit better with website background.
Website is – http://patiss-themes.com/future-landing-page
Hello, Thank you very much! Did I mention, that you are really helpfull? Thank you 1000x. Best regards, Patisss
Thank you! Just made some changes in logo, in additional, changed border shadow for background and changed rounded corners to normal corners.
Please take a look, and tell how does it look .
I really appreciate your help, thanks!
Site – http://patiss-themes.com/future-landing-page Best regards,
Hello, Yesterday I tried to upload, but without luck, got message -
You should improve the overall look and feel here.
Consider the background, headings, font choice, overuse of shadows and the overall design.
Not sure what is wrong with background and shadows.
I changed font’s to Oswald, and fixed some spacing/padding issues.
Please take a look and suggest – http://patiss-themes.com/future-landing-page/
Thank you very much for suggestions! I will change font’s, and think something about buttons.
I really appreciate your help guys!
How do you think, is this theme far from “Approved”?
I would appreciate for more feedback.
Thank you very much for your suggestions ! Will update everything!