Then you should either make bigger the font or make the tank smaller. The organization of the logo should be like an isosceles trapezoid, that’s normally what they look for in here.
Text “Tag line” not clear ..!!
LuisFaus SAYS What program are you using to make and render this?
Program is 3D Studio Max ..!!
really great job ..!! good luck with sales ..
SomethingDesign SAYS Your logo is now unique enough. The colors you choose are strange Your slogan in invisible in small sizes Pay attention to details
Here are some rules for designing a good logo
Before you begin sketching, first articulate the message you want your logo to convey. Try writing a one-sentence image and mission statement to help focus your efforts. Stay true to this statement while creating your logo. But that may not be enough to get you started. Here are some additional tactics and considerations that will help you create an appropriate company logo:
Look at the logos of other businesses in your industry. Do your competitors use solid, conservative images, or flashy graphics and type? Think about how you want to differentiate your logo from those of your competition......
+1 helpful very good
I think it has to do more with the typography accompanying the graphic elements as they dont correlate one another. Also in the second and fourth you need a tagline. Also as my personal opinion i quite like the third one ( and just just need an S at the end of “firework”) As for the first, second and … they would need a bit more work. Since the second and … are highly overdone, and doesn’t communicate much. The first one you should work a bit more on the shape of the woman, and perhaps removing that half moon line.
+1 I think that he’s a lot of reason
==>>(I think half moon line is good idea, but doesn’t communicate much with the woman )
in spite of hard rejection, I think no problem to resubmit if you make changes..!!
But as my personal opinion, I like the 4th logo
SomethingDesign SAYS Pay attention to details. That shadow should run smoothly along the icon shape. Don’t use neon colors. That colors are hard to reproduce (nearly impossible) in CMYK. Works only in Pantone. Also you can try a different silhouette skyline.
thank you for these observations, I noted all these points and I’m going to work on these big lines that you gave to me
Please gives me your critique for this logo, aesthetic and technical quality
I have many rejections, and I don’t want that they continue,
Thank you for advance
script Most useful, especially in the logos, good luck in sale