use outside images only for your preview image, do not put into the pack.. i don’t think it would be a problem, then..
good job but i think the typography needs more work.. you can make some bottom text layout changes, stylish layer styles, unique font selection and change title colors(especially blue). Also there are many differences between the upper side and lower side of the flyer, i mean upper is full but lower is poor..
hope it helps,
Best regards, squizmo.
i think you should work a little on typography, i mean putting more text on it. Do not make the title “DAY” bigger than “VALENTINES”, make different layout to them.. Also put more work to the background (texture, shapes, lights, objects, etc..) i think a glossy finish is more ideal for impressing people..
i hope it helps,
best regards, squizmo
yeah december is my best month with sales !
maybe you can make colorful versions of the circles. And make some of the circles’ layers overlay or change the opacity of them… Try different layer styles! Good luck
I think this looks a lot better now! I like it!
One thing I’m not so sure about is what’s below the box at the bottom? The pointy edges stick out undersides and I’m not sure what to make of it?
Other than that, personally, I like it.
thanks chris, you made me see its non-compliance.. so i will work on a little bit more.. best regards…
Hi, still i’m working on this flyer.. May be it needs some improvements, help me to approve please..