I’m sorry but I very much doubt that this will be accepted. The is very little sublty at all. It is very repeditive, and very little attention has been applied to typography.
Have a 6 month holidya! Or, give em a call and work things out…
Australia really is a buitiful place!
strong flash skills
Thanks simnor for having a look and taking the time to reply, it’s really appreciated.
The light circular bit (I cant remember the word for it) is way to prominent, it was the first thing I saw and that shouldn’t be the case
It is very prominent, I supose as the designer i didn’t however realise really how prominant it is. I will definatly be changing this, probably making it dark.
PS. Its a radial gradient =P
Add some more space, it all looks crammed in probably because its such a small preview
Maby, i could be the dotted line seperators, however i did try to add heaps of space, epecially around the edges…
Too many borders
Yea, i spose they can become a little distracting, I’ll see how it looks without or with them dulled down a little.
The two lots of text look out of place (Need More ENERGY and Vivante Studios)
After reading you comments and then looking at the screenshots this one really jumped out as me as one to fix, thanks!
If my reviewer could drop in then that would be exelent, however, i’m not going to post who you are in case you don’t want everyone to know. If you don’t want to post then please email me!
Any more opinoins are most welcome!
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Sleek Stylish Dark Portfilio
Any comments and critisism are very welcome! Also if the review could possible expand on the comments then that would be great!
I’m somewhat interested please send me a link to the site and any other details including your budget to thomas[at]pixent[dot]com[dot]au
WAY too much gradients, use more subtle effect and more whitespace
It looks pretty good. I would suggest the following:
- Compress the reflections vertiacally to it look like it is standing up
- Make the feature area a sliding area, very popular atm
- Make the menu clickable area larger
- A little more emphasis on the shadow effect