I think you must use more contrast colors. And you can find more beautiful “gold” yellow from sites like kuler or colourlovers
I think you should lower the drop shadows and inside shadows on top elements.
i got my feedback. thanks to everyone. removed template link on my page
yes, good to know everyone can get rejection. There are also some authors has sold above 10.000$ but even they can also get rejection because of some issues.
I wanted to say that, you want to use some big font-size, big images overall big sized elements on your design but they couldnt be.
i would use bigger font-size on countdown and the width of layoutis not enough i think.
i would change the place of social network links from top to anywhere else. Because you used shiny stripes come from air, but it is cut with that social network bar. i would remove it from there and get a breath to my design..
Also i have a forum threat about my template.. http://themeforest.net/forums/thread/i-got-my-first-rejection/53281 you can see my template there.
Siddharth also rejected my template i am now working to improve it like you
i think your design wanted to be BIG but couldn’t be big. Be brave about that i think. Also use cool icons, dont use texty twitter face links.
I like the menu, although since the left side it a bit rounded, I’d prefer that side to be a protruding a bit.
The slider is okay for the front, but for me, there’s something odd about the fading arrows clashing with the border.Solid colors is good and I like the pattern you used for the background. +1 to Smartik’s suggestion on the color schemes.
i didnt think getting reviews would be this helpful, because i didnt really think to change menu. i got the point you wanted to say and try something on menus.
thanks for your helpful review
Hi, tinyamasisurum0. Your template looks good, but you need to work more to it. If you have included only this color scheme in download .zip file, is a good idea to add and other color schemes. Also you have white spaces in your design. For example: Home page contain only page title and the slider. After that is white space and come about page. So try to add more content and more user friendly color schemes. Good luck.
hi Smartik, thanks for your review first..
i am happy beacause of you saying “looks good”. i have 2 more great color schemes with pastel attitude and wanting one more some “dirty”
i am reviewing and designing whole pages.. thanks again for your helpful thoughts