You have to be so careful with technical stuff.
Technical will get it binned every time.
I tend to check my work to death, so it all falls down to how good it looks.
And l tend to go overboard with visuals as well, especially if it is a large project.
The second square arrangement on the left, are out, or not centered.
Probably the main reason?
Try saving it as Ping-24, Ping does have furry edges or a thin white edge around all of the elements on some applications.
Looks good to me, eventhough l don’t do business cards?
But l would get rid of the J- in the John, or make it the same scale as the other text, (it looks annoying having it bigger than the other text).
And having the marketing executive text right indexed with the JOHN is risky.
Pretty good design overall, it is probably the text hierarchy, since the text below is so close together it looks like one block.
And the model being faded into the background could be the main reason, (it looks like she has no hands).
Well that, and possibly the design being too simple?
If this is your first try, it won’t be long before you get your first one in.
I think that it is a case of same dog, different fleas?
The different colored fonts and colored stripes are probably the main thing letting you down?
Keep the color schemes more general, and possibly add something else to the central elements, and you might have a better chance.
Good design overall, but the text has let you down.
Hierarchy issues with the bottom text, can’t use social media icons, probably too many fonts and pairing issues, (looks like some of the fonts are being forced into each other).
The overall design was probably ok, thought.
Deviantart is good. Pinterest is better. However every click through and sales count to the bottom line. Good to build a community around the products on deviant and get more followers. I recommend keep posting all your items there with your referral links. Use smaller preview images though. The long preview images don’t work as well. I see more click throughs when I started using smaller preview images.
Unfortunately Pinterest has disabled external links below the images, l pretty much have to tell everyone to go to the main one up the top.
I will still post new material there, but overall, Twitter seems to be the best one!