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umers36 says

Guys

I am going to develop this landing page. Just curious if it’s creative enough to develop. Please give me your valuable feedback with areas of improvement.

Here is the link

https://creativemarket.com/csswallet/62404-Nexus-Landing-Page-PSD-Template/screenshots/#screenshot2

Regards

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umers36 says

I am interested. Kindly add my skype “umersp”

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umers36 says

Hello Designers

I am working on a PSD and getting it ready to submit to html template category. I want the feedback on design elements and if its suitable for wordpress or html template category?

Here is the link https://creativemarket.com/csswallet/33595-Corp-Creative-PSD-Template

Please see the high res images by clicking the large thumbnails and give your feedback.

Regards Umer

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umers36 says


http://imgur.com/OSdPAPy
I cannot make what is what. in the name of making it look unique, you have made it look confusing and also lot of design principles were not followed. difficult to point each one at this stage.

Just mention couple of things please. That will make me work more along design principles

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umers36 says
Guys can u see this and comment please. Sorry if this offends someone https://creativemarket.com/csswallet/33595-Corp-Creative-PSD-Template
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You will need to learn some basics… you cant set 30pt leading on 13 font. It’s not natural for a reader, nor aesthetical. Apart from that specific point, I cannot guide you through the whole page… as said, read some articles, first thing is to learn, then implement. About the layout – it was done too many times. Make sure its unique. How? You need to find out yourself. There are tons of possibilities. Also this is only homepage – you might have more problems with pages that contain more text and styles.
I seen your design which you published and got 4 sales and I am not impressed . so i doubt your instructions :yawn:
Thanks for pointing that out. Can you look at the link I posted above and comment on what I have created so far? I want to make my design look sharp, minimal and adaptable for every framework.
Well i can not suggest well Enough . I am making my first design to publish . All i keep in mind , If my design can beat what is already there , It will be approved . Looking at your design i can see you really did some hard work but brown colors need to be changed to something which will look Clean and crispy , Look at the font style and minimize the size where needed , images play big role , They should be of high Quality Etc . Over all these . compare your design with which already there and you think your one is better , You will have more chances to get approved .

Thanks for the feedback. I just changed fonts and added more sections but still with browns. You can click that link again and see what I have done I will try with more colors, may be orange or lavender.

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umers36 says


You will need to learn some basics… you cant set 30pt leading on 13 font. It’s not natural for a reader, nor aesthetical. Apart from that specific point, I cannot guide you through the whole page… as said, read some articles, first thing is to learn, then implement. About the layout – it was done too many times. Make sure its unique. How? You need to find out yourself. There are tons of possibilities. Also this is only homepage – you might have more problems with pages that contain more text and styles.
I seen your design which you published and got 4 sales and I am not impressed . so i doubt your instructions :yawn:

Thanks for pointing that out. Can you look at the link I posted above and comment on what I have created so far? I want to make my design look sharp, minimal and adaptable for every framework.

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umers36 says

You will need to learn some basics… you cant set 30pt leading on 13 font. It’s not natural for a reader, nor aesthetical. Apart from that specific point, I cannot guide you through the whole page… as said, read some articles, first thing is to learn, then implement. About the layout – it was done too many times. Make sure its unique. How? You need to find out yourself. There are tons of possibilities. Also this is only homepage – you might have more problems with pages that contain more text and styles.

point well taken. I think its better to publish this along with parallax html theme.

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umers36 says

Not good enough to make it in creative PSD section. All elements are standard, typography is quite bad (leading especially)... pricing tables & ipad mocks won’t change a thing.

Can you suggest some refinements? Typography, layout etc?

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umers36 says

Thanks for your reply. Can you suggest few refinements regarding typography ? Headings etc?

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