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I tried to be as creative as possible. I guess it’s not good enough…
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- Add contrast
- Work on typography hierarchy
- These clouds in background doesn’t look too good
- ‘Buy’ button is covering text
- Work on divs instead of tables
- You have few errors in code http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.beetlesales.com%2Fcloudsquare%2Ftemplate1.php
Good luck!
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Hello, if clouds, sun and sky image is a background, give it position top center, or yet better, rework it to fit wide screens, currently large empty white piece on the right side looks embarrassing. Same about footer.
I do not know what are the exact requirements to landing pages, but yours one has no features. I am not sure it may go. Subscription form does not work, right? At least no notification that email has been sent is shown to user. I would make the form working.
Shadows are rough to my eye, cloud background would be better to work on more, make the illustration more professionally looking.
And… markup is in tables???
Wish you good luck!
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virtuti is right you should utilize the blank space which is looking very embarrassing. 
