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IG_design says

Demo: http://ivang-design.com/apollo/

1st:
This is definitely an interesting design but the typography and visual hierarchy are weak and will need a lot of improvements.
2nd:
The changes are not enough. When a change is requested it should be significant enough to change the look and feel of the site. Changing a few elements does not change the visual inconsistencies in your design. If you’re unsure how to proceed and need further feedback, you might consider asking for input from other community members and designers via our forums. http://themeforest.net/forums

I worked on visual hiearchy, checked all padding/margins… Maybe to change font? I dont know anymore.

I would be grateful if someone could help me!

Thanks!

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pixel-industry says

WOW!!! Only thing I don’t like is the clients section. Logo types has small contarst – input other logos inside.. Also headings on sections need to have smaller padding from the top. Other that that I love it. It’s clean, original, beautiful, almost perfect! Good luck and don’t give up!!!

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pixel-industry says

I also think you should send a ticket to support, ‘cause this theme is just perfect and needs to be approved! (just replace those client images) :)... It’s really been a long time that some theme was sooo impresive…

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IG_design says

Thanks buddy!

I will add more creativity to client section :) and fix logo, thanks!

But i have feeling that not gonna be enough.

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IG_design says

I dont know, i will try to upload one more time, not gonna go so quick to support ticket.

Thanks!

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SpyroPress says

I must say its simply great….and creativity at its best.

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IG_design says

Thanks Spyro!

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Little-Neko says

Hi, It’s a really nice concept. You should put it aside, look for inspiration and come back to it after a few days. Then try to think about what you could change and what you have to keep from the original template (maybe not better, but different). Good luck!

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IG_design says

Thanks Neko!

I’m looking for inspiration right now. :)

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tagrendy says

Few that I noticed. Body text seems too large to me (16px), and line height not enough. In “OUR WORKING PROCESS” section try to group each element so that it shows which title belongs to which text visually. Try fancier font choices, seems a bit plain to me.

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