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FlatKing says

All the spinning icons and such is a bit much for me

The footer needs work, the divider lines look nice however the colors don’t seem to work, and the melon on the right looks way too in your face

Nice to see hover top right on the social icons

The melon icon looks pixaleted – Create an actual image it’ll look more professional.

Like the menu however use font-size: 24px on the actual icon

Menu should hide on hover out.

Would suggest different images for the sliders, not so intrusive – they look fine however with the words going over them, it’s difficult to see. Use something from unsplash

about us needs a lot of work

About us timeline should change z-index on hover or something to stop content being hidden

Testimonial box looks bad with the actual coloured triangle add this to it

.arrow-down{
position:relative;
}
.arrow-down:before {
content: '';
width: 0;
height: 0;
margin: 0 0 0 23px;
-webkit-border-top: 15px solid #e4e4e4;
-moz-border-top: 15px solid #e4e4e4;
-o-border-top: 15px solid #e4e4e4;
border-top: 14px solid rgb(255, 255, 255);
-webkit-border-left: 15px solid transparent;
-moz-border-left: 15px solid transparent;
-o-border-left: 15px solid transparent;
border-left: 14px solid rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);
-webkit-border-right: 15px solid transparent;
-moz-border-right: 15px solid transparent;
-o-border-right: 15px solid transparent;
border-right: 14px solid rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);
position: absolute;
left: -37px;
bottom: 2px;
}
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FlatKing says

Percentage bars looks rushed.

The arrows for the “Awesome team sliders” need some room

The curved shadow looks really out of place

About Me

Change the images to progressive jpgs they’ll load a lot faster if there is no need for transparency.

The >> on the careers looks out of place

Change image to Image on hover of My Work.

Services

Doesn’t really seem to be a reason for the circles with the icons

The icon boxes at the top look rushed

The despicable me video looks unprofessional due to the blurry image.

Price table looks rushed – The star looks like it’s connected to advanced – give “Sign up” some space

404

The 404 looks fine – if not a bit odd. That is also “flat” so the above shadow looks out of place

Portfolio

Like the link click.

The image does looks off due to the border – Is the border needed?

Hovering over the circles makes the social icons wobble

The social icon count looks bad

Don’t get the circle hover turning to a curved square

The link icon is out of place

Blog

The load more button icon is known to be a refresh button – Might work with some text

Give the “icon” Admin some space to breath

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charlie4282 says

WOW that is generous feedback from FlatKing!

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isoolt says

FlatKing i donot know what to say really i appreciate your opinion.

i will make these changes and thanks for your advices

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isoolt says

WOW that is generous feedback from FlatKing!

yep nice feedback, and also waiting your new feedback :)

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Nitro_Themes says

Hey man you can always contact support to have another reviewer take another look at it.

Here is my 4.5 cents.

The footer is not jiving with the theme man also copyright should be on the left lined up with the logo not in the center.

So here is what i think if the footer: Way too big man and there is too much empty space under the content because of the slogan on the right.

The main slider has no buttons or nav arrows this is a must.

Separate the 3 teaser boxes vertically with the same lines as horizontally.

Here is an idea for the footer. just have the bottom footer showing and with a button reveal the rest of the top footer but make sure that you fix the top footer because right now it is totally ruining the template.

Get rid of either the breadcrumb or the slogans on the top if the pages. It makes it look too busy

For the portfolios i would add more than one row of images. When the page loads only shows 3. Why don’t you add a load more button to load more images.

The top footer the content is not lined up properly there is more space between the twitter and the photo stream than the recent posts and the twitter also should separate the content vertically.

For the contact form i would hide the map and do up a button to reveal it by sliding the content below the map down.

Get rid of the circles in the blurry section. I like the animated stuff but the blurry bg does not look good with it. Maybe if you change the background or the color of the circles.

Get rid of the circle social icons in the top footer and add the same icons in the bottom footer as you have it in the header, just different color combo.

The contact info should be a smaller text size than the H3.

Here is the validation link still 4 errors which have to be fixed:

http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fgothic.fhero.net%2FMelon%2Fcontact-us.html&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline&group=0

I still think that there is not enough contrast, looks too light and kinda washed out.

Cheers man hope this helps.

Lester

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isoolt says

thanks mafloral for your advice i’m working on it

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Nitro_Themes says

Hey Love the modal stuff, btw add some nav arrows to the fancybox lightbox.

Let me know when you update the site. I also had an idea of the 3 teaser boxes. Why don’t you split them into 3 individual boxes and have a zoom hover on them. Just an idea.

Cheers and good luck

Lester

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AjaxTown says

Hey Man, i really appreciate your design. From a developer point of view i find it perfect. Cant really suggest you for any improvement after reading the FlatKing’s comment. Even i am struggling hard to make my theme accepted. Charlie was very helpful as always but still the reviewers just wont accept it.

I really like Themeforest because: - I see awesome designs. - I get to converse with awesome people. - I get to know where i am lagging. - And many other.

I dislike themeforest because: - The reviewers are partial (not all, few are awesome) - They ask for unique design whereas i see themes getting accepted with similar design patterns. - No proper feedback. All automated replies. I am really not sure, if a human reviewer really reviews my theme.

Anyways, awesome design and good work.

Cheers, Saha

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isoolt says

Hey Love the modal stuff, btw add some nav arrows to the fancybox lightbox.

Let me know when you update the site. I also had an idea of the 3 teaser boxes. Why don’t you split them into 3 individual boxes and have a zoom hover on them. Just an idea.

Cheers and good luck

Lester

thanks for your feedback, now i’m trying to redesign some elements and i hope they will look good and which 3 teaser boxes you mean :)

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